CKBERG@UGA.cc.uga.edu (Cathy Krusberg) Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation by Catherine B. Krusberg INTRODUCTION The first seventeen parts of this verse adaptation were posted in spring 1994; they were all I had completed at the time. I've finally versified the remainder of the movie, using the same scheme. (I've also slightly revised material previously posted; hence the repost of parts 1-17). The first part of the adaptation shows more influence of the Streamline dub than I'm happy about; I got away from that more in the second half, I hope. Parts 18-31 are not as finely wrought as the first half -- you can tell I was working under pressure, as the same words get used a little too often in the rhyme scheme -- but for me the verse still preserves the spirit of the film in its own stylized way. The poem is, I must stress, an *adaptation*. Although it should be intelligible to anyone, it will probably be most palatable to those who have seen VHD once or twice and have the basic set of images and actions to match what I have written. If you've seen VHD again and again (or as I have, again and again and again....), you *will* notice discrepancies from both the original Japanese and the Streamline dub. In addition to altering dialogue to accommodate meter and rhyme, I have added various touches, such as giving more depth to some characters, to enhance pacing and atmosphere. I have also made some additions for the sake of continuity (e.g., the forest D gallops through en route to Castle Lee, which *is* there when he leaves). More information on what I changed and why can be found in the afterword; putting it here would give too many spoilers (and make the introduction too long ^_- ). I have taken a few liberties with descriptions of characters. In the movie, D's eye color seems to be gray or blue (when it can be discerned; in the cel reproductions I have seen, his eyes are blue), but I have given him green eyes to match his auburn hair -- although his hair is not, in fact, consistently auburn. (I think it's whatever shade of brown came out of the paint-pot next.) The nature of Rei Ginsei's dark, heavy necklace was revealed to me in Julie Froelich's fanfic "For One Day's Rule" (_Anime House Presents_ Vol. 1 [1988]). Julie, if you ever read this: Thanks. For more than you know. A LITTLE ABOUT THE MECHANICS: I have used tetrameter (four-foot lines) throughout, varying the meter in an attempt to capture mood, using iambs (for example) to slow action or build suspense. Count Lee *always* speaks in iambs; I hope it makes him sound suitably "dead." I started using an abab rhyme scheme wherever Ramika appears but found this too taxing; only her speech (whole quatrains) is consistently abab. (Well, almost consistently.) Rei Ginsei's speech alliterates, in honor of alliterative Germanic poetry (as in the original _Beowulf_, although I have not observed the alliteration as strictly as the _Beowulf_ poet did). This has made his dialogue a bit stilted, but I find the effect not unpleasing. Of course, maybe that's because I'm infatuated with Rei. (He's sooooo good-looking!) SOURCES My sources include _Vampire Hunter D_ untranslated; VHD fansubbed; the Streamline dub; the Dayton Animation Club VHD script (ftp-able from the venice site); and a synopsis from an unauthorized VHD mook (which, incidentally, I would love to get my hands on; I worked from a xeroxed copy of it). I surmise that this last work is based on the novel(s), as it contains a number of details that are inconsistent with the anime; it is my source for background of the VHD universe. While I confess responsibility for a number of peculiarities of interpretation, the matter of the movie itself must be credited to Hideuki Kikuchi, author of _Kyuketsuki Hantaa D_ (Vampire Hunter D) and subsequent novels in the series of the same name; Yasushi Hirano, the _Vampire Hunter D_ scriptwriter; and Toyoo Ashida, director of _Vampire Hunter D_. When _Vampire Hunter D_ was released (1986), three novels in the Kyuketsuki Hantaa D series had been published; as I input this (spring 1995), there are to my knowledge nine novels plus a book of side stories -- all in Japanese, none translated; all feature cover paintings and b/w interior art by Yoshitaka Amano, who was also the character designer for the anime _Vampire Hunter D_. I surmise that the anime was based on the first novel of the series. DISCLAIMER My _Vampire Hunter D_ adaptation is a work of fan fiction and as such is not intended to infringe on any rights associated with any other version of _Vampire Hunter D_. I *love* this movie, warts, continuity flaws, and all -- well, how else could I have ground out nearly 200 K of rhymed verse that does little more than retell the story? ^_- The Certifiable Vampire Hunter D Fanatic Cathy Krusberg Internet: ckberg@uga.cc.uga.edu Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation by Catherine B. Krusberg ***************************************************************** From the animated movie _Vampire Hunter D_. Based on the novel by Hideuki Kikuchi; script by Yasushi Hirano. Directed by Toyoo Ashida. English-dubbed version adapted, produced, and directed by Carl Macek; English-language script by Tom Wyner. ***************************************************************** Part 1 She stalks in the night, in the blue of the moon That turns slender grass blades to silver and black As they whip side to side in the huntress's path: Soft rustle before her, dead still at her back. Her steady tread murmurs a rhythm of life; Two braids, moonlight-silvered, sway time with her stride; Between them, a cross-pendant hangs at her neck, Lest darkness should take her and make her its bride. Her gun couched and ready, its bayonet leads, And indeed there is cause: a loud rustling ahead, A cracking of branches, a juice-sucking crunch: She turns and runs toward it, then looks and stops dead; Upraises her free hand to thumb a remote: With a click and a buzz blue light pierces the dark From one side, then another; again from a third; A great head whips about in a teeth-and-spit arc. Monstrous hate swiftly narrows the tiny red eyes Deep-set in blue scales, as the lizard's thin lip Draws back from white scythe-blades that half-hide a tongue Growing tense in a snarl, and with fruit pulp a-drip. Its bayonet levelled, the gun speaks its piece: A laser-ray strikes; the beast opens its jaws To spit flame in return; but the huntress can dodge And shoot yet again without trace of a pause. Tongue lolling, the great lizard flees with a squeal; Heavy toes thud away as the bright shots go wide Of the ostrich-like form that recedes in the dark, And the huntress half lowers the gun at her side. Her head alone turns, whipping braids through the air In two pale half-haloes; she lifts her free hand To teeth and tight lips; whistles clarion-clear In a long, falling note: a shrill, wordless command. "Luke!" she calls; a white head is tossed high against stars, With its thick flaxen mane flying up higher still For a half-moment frozen, a sunburst of hair, As Luke neighs his reply at his mistress's will. Pale hooves pound the grass; he need not even slow As his rider leaps on, clapping heels to his sides. This swift pace is enough; she is almost in range Of the creature that flees faster still as she rides. She leans low and couches her rifle to aim: One shot pierces the neck in a spatter of red; A second bursts through the reptilian heart, And a third blasts the top off the sabre-toothed head. Now eyeless and brainless, the creature runs on For a few shortened strides, as if fast-moving death Flows from head down to body, to sharp-taloned feet So the great carcass falls with its last snort of breath. It quivers once and then lies still. Luke halts beside the outstretched tail And bows his neck, at ease once more; His mistress' aim could never fail. His rider swings to touch the ground Her bayonet now pointed low To pierce hard scales; she leans to watch Blood fountain, well--then cease its flow. One fewer stalks of beasts that steal Fruits meant as food for humankind. The rider turns to faithful Luke, For now relieved in heart and mind; Caresses muzzle velvet, white; Luke speaks a soft horse-tone; she sighs. All four eyes close in welcome rest, So neither sees the great neck rise-- Still eyeless, still brainless, with jaws open wide The huge beast rises up, then swoops down on its prey. The blade-curved white teeth pierce Luke's flesh at the neck, Lift him up, fling his mistress aside in blood-spray. As a red flood streams over the once-proud white neck Down limp, helpless legs, drips from hooves to the ground, The rider half-rises: "Oh, God, it's got Luke!" Horror-stricken, recovers her feet in a bound. At her belt is a whip, leather-brown to the eye But shot through with magic; she lashes it out With a whistling whir, so it leaps to attack The impossible dead thing, and forth like a gout Of blood from a vein pierced by arrow or sword From its tip flashes white-pink; a fierce rope of light Buzzes, glowing with power; enwraps the great neck: The jaws loose their grip, showing teeth red and white. Luke falls to one side; to the other the beast. No sooner than scales touch the grass comes a shot That parts head from neck; three more blasts leave no trace Of cold blood, flesh, or bones: only smoke, rising, hot. "Luke!" cries the brave huntress, recalling her mount. She starts to run toward him; stops short as she sees The white corpse lifted up in long, slavering jaws Of the half-human brute that stalks forth from the trees. "A werewolf!" she gasps. "Oh my God! Get away!" Its yellow eyes glow as it growls through the blood That flows from Luke's shoulders and past its curled lips, Thence to stream to the ground, turning earth to red mud. Its long gray fur bristles, and nearer it leans To stretch forth one talon with delicate grace, Pluck the chain at her neck so it snaps like a string, And the cross falls from sight in this desolate place. Luke still in its teeth, the great man-beast leaps high; The young woman falls backward, as over her head It is gone in a bound, and she half turns to see Its form blend with the night, disappeared as if dead. A silence fills the moonlit world; She slowly looks from side to side. All nature seems to hold its breath: At thunder's voice, her eyes grow wide. Bright lightning flares; the huntress turns Again, and now her keen eyes mark A scarp's peak where a figure stands Enwrapped in black as night's own dark. She knows the face--*She knows the face*-- "No--go away," she murmurs low, And rises, rifle firm in hand, Fires at the figure; in the glow Of shots that strike its dark-wrapped chest With burst on burst of radiant red Its eyes shut tight against the glare, But that is all; the white-haired head Turns not nor bows; the gun is still. Its wielder in her thoughts can see The talon sharp, the parting chain-- Her cross, now but a memory. She lowers the useless rifle now From angled high to muzzle down. Her blue eyes glare; her mouth grows hard, Fair features set in a lowering frown. Above her head the craggy face Relaxes: eyelids slowly part. Black iris-dots meet blue-eyed gaze: A silent threat to chill the heart. Like coals on ash that seem extinct Until they feel a gust of breath, Then burn with red, devouring life, So changed unblinking eyes of death: First black on white and wide to stare Upon the human form below, They narrow slowly; from within An undead fire begins to glow. Like a sunrise from hell that penumbrates a storm, So the old eyes grow brighter, and not far beneath, Lips writhe back in a smile, and the jaws open wide As a soft growl escapes past the lengthening teeth. Now the figure's arms move: with a slow, practiced grace Of millennia born, one extends to the side, Then the other; below them, the spreading black cape Rustles soft in the breeze as the arms hold it wide. He speaks at last in deep, dead tones: "You know my name: Count Magnus Lee. You know I long have ruled these lands. You know that beast belonged to me. You know the payment I exact From those who dare to doubt my might. Yet, for your beauty, I demand A trifle less than is my right." End Part 1 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 2 Ten thousand years the world has aged Since wars drove mankind from the light: Long centuries beneath the earth, A shield from radiation's blight. At last--or so the story goes-- Some stalwarts overcame their fears And ventured forth to view the land That sheltered them for years on years. They met a brave new world indeed, Of cities rebuilt wall by wall; Of mutants that could pass for men; Of vampires ruling over all. "Dark Lords" the creatures call themselves, And in this world they hold great power, Yet they are subject in their turn; The vampire culture, like a flower Has bloomed a time and now must fade, Inbred to weakness; age begins To overtake the vampire lords And humankind now slowly wins Its cities back; Dark Lords retreat. Some die who cannot learn new ways, And some are killed, and others flee To strongholds of their former days. In cities now the humans rule, But in removes and on frontiers Stand castles with obsidian spires Unchanged through all a vampire's years. | --==////////////////[}}====* | From roots within a chasm dark, A castle black as night stands high: Arch and buttress, drawbridge strong-- Spires, arrows dark against the sky. Below, stones pierce the drought-cracked plain From bedrock roots grown sheer and sharp: Black summits, like dead adder's fangs Above a field of brown-gray scarp. At plain-edge, overhanging cliffs Stand stark and gray; their shade defines The borders of Count Lee's own land With twilight dim, not hard-drawn lines. Above the cliffs is earth indeed: Mountain and forest and grassy plain Where, through the farmland green with crops, Feet, hooves, and wheels have worn a lane. Twin dusty tracks split field from field, Sometimes run straight and sometimes wend In graceful curves through hill and dale, And each horizon seems its end; But even as the sky's broad dome Grows high-noon blue or twilight gray, Or red when clouds surround the dawn, Or black as sunlight goes away, But never ends, so rolls the road: It widens, narrows, darker grows When rain meets dust; becomes a ford To make its way where water flows Or nearly seems to disappear As the land grows flat and hard and dry, So a rider must have vision keen To see where the long day's route may lie. Each who would travel must choose his own road With the knowledge that knowledge is what we all lack Of the course of the path: We can only know this: That one's own road forbids that a rider turn back. End part 2 Ascii sword by Tua Xiong Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 3 From road-end rises a figure dark, Its outlines blurred by midday haze: Hat brim, high collar, and shouldered hilt Slow reveal themselves in the noontide blaze. A shadow falls about the form From the broad-brimmed hat that splits the face To dark above and pale below Where sun and passion have left no trace, But broader still are the crown-spread tips Of the collar surmounting the long blue cloak, Now and then entangled in auburn locks That the wind caresses like wayward smoke. At the rider's chest runs a simple row Of red triangles; it has a twin At the hem that travels from boot to boot, To the saddle's cantle and down again. Strong brown-gloved hands guide a cyborg horse, Steely of hide, its red-lit eye As bright as the rounded ruby shapes Seen at breast and shoulder and hip to lie. A fierce wind blows over the green of the fields: It seems Nature's own breath can inspirit tall grass With the rhythm of life: see it bow, straighten, bow, To acknowledge the power of what it lets it pass. On the brown double track stand sharp-toed boots Of the huntress in daylight, her feet astride The dry-grassed median, fists on her hips, Braids flapping like pennants, fierce blue eyes wide, Skirt short as the sleevelets that leave her arms bare She seeks to hide nothing--except--yes, except-- Just above the cross-pendant she wears once again A round brooch, a broad choker: the secret is kept. At the hilltop before her a shadow appears Like a dark sunrise growing, hat crown and hat brim; Collar spread like two horns, and a long sturdy hilt At the shoulder; its blade must be heavy and grim. The horse's eyes glow, and its bushy black mane Nearly hides the horned buckle that bears a green stone At the tall rider's waist; the wind blows his long hair Past the shadowed eyes sought by the huntress's own. At the crest of the hill the black hooves rest foursquare; The steel horse murmurs softly; far louder the snap Of the reins that lie loose in long curves by its neck As the hard-blowing wind makes them rustle and flap. Blue eyes challenge the shadow: "No beggar can ride Such a beast; but your clothes bear no sigil or sign Of a master. So you are a Hunter for hire?" She receives no response but the wind's endless whine. "Can you speak?" she demands; the wind tugs at his cloak; Dark folds flutter and float as it blows them about. He sits tall and unmoving, head forward a bit, And below on the road blue eyes harden with doubt. "That's a strange sword indeed, with its snake-twisted guard. Can the rest be as fine as the hilt that you bear? Is your hand half so good? Are you swordsman enough To defend such a blade as its haft claims you wear?" No response meets this sally; her ready right hand Grabs the whip at her side, lashes out its brown length, And the magic it bears lifts her feet from the ground As she flings its tip upward with all of her strength. From the brown tip spring tendrils: first pink as raw flesh, They grow stronger, extend with a buzz, lightning-like, Glowing paler to white as iron ready to flow: Four bright lines of power, each snake-poised to strike. Now she swings her arm forward; the tendrils reach out; As one flies past his face, the dark form moves aside By a handbreadth, then straightens: "Nice move!" snarls his foe; And the lines spread, surrounding him, netlike and wide, Then leap inward, ensnaring: one wraps at each wrist Glowing red-brown to pink; then a third at his chest: The fourth skims past collar and under brown hair To encircle his neck, like a python at rest. Booted feet touch the ground, and the huntress glares up The long brown-to-pink line from her hand to the face Where she sees no emotion or thought to resist, No surprise and no anger; of fear, not a trace, And she digs in her heels: "Can you not even fight? I shall see you dismounted, your fine cape and hat In the dust: you'll surrender your sword to my hands, You incompetent coward--What say you to that?" Then she yanks in the whip, pulls with all of her weight. The lines brighten, grow taut, give their molten-iron glow. In the weird phosphor-light time and motion seem stilled, Teeth are gritted, lines pulled hard--and something must go. Snap-snap! One wrist, another, is freed as the lines Louder buzz, then fall parted and melt to thin air. Snap! His chest is released and the face still unmoved. Snap! The fourth strand dissolves from beneath the long hair. The huntress falls backward and lands with a grunt And a gasp in the dust, open-mouthed can but gape. Harness jingles and creaks as the black hooves stride past; Forward gazes the rider, wind ruffling his cape. "Wait!" the woman calls out, feet beneath her once more As she rises, ignoring the dust she has gained: "You are no common hunter, with no common prey-- God, how could I have known--" and she pauses, voice pained-- "Vampire Hunter!" At these words the black hooves are stilled, The cloaked rider impassive beneath the bright sun. "Wait, don't go--please, I'm sorry! It's true I lacked cause To attack you--I see that you are such a one As can help in my trouble. I had to be sure That you were no coward; too many I've seen Who gave promises bold, but no more could they do. May I hire you? I need you--your service, I mean. Look--" her voice nearly breaks, and she touches her throat, Pulls aside the broad choker, her head turned away. "This is where--Magnus Lee--placed his kiss on my flesh." Livid marks speak details she cannot bear to say. Unmoving she stands; the tall rider dismounts, One gloved hand takes her chin, turns her head left, then right. Blue eyes closed, she protests not; soft sounds from her throat Are the only response; she will not flee nor fight. Through the gloves he can sense it; she speaks but the truth. The long fingers glide lower, and two slip between Injured flesh and dark velvet, let shadowed eyes probe: That a Dark Lord has wronged her can clearly be seen. "What's your name?" he asks softly; these are his first words. "Doris Lang," is the answer. "Can you help my cause? I can pay you, don't worry--it's true I'm not rich-- But for three meals a day--" she must blush then and pause To avert half-closed eyes "--and for me, for my bed That you'll share if you wish--will you take on this task? I'd prefer anything to a vampire's embrace-- I just want my own life! Is that so much to ask?" The tall figure crouches, gaze level with hers, Hair still teased by the wind, dancing over his face In long, slow-writhing tendrils, the shadowed eyes wide With fierce, tacit acceptance. "There is no disgrace," He says, not unkindly, "In what you've endured, Except to this vampire; it's those such as he That I live to destroy. That is payment enough. Doris Lang, I shall take on this Count Magnus Lee." End part 3 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 4 Sheep dash through a field, bleating loudly in fear As they jostle each other, their slit-pupilled eyes Growing glassy with panic; close-trailing the flock, At the heels of a straggler, their nemesis flies: A thirsty red mist, an elongated globe That stretches itself as it shimmers in flight. A pseudopod glows, reaching over the back Of its woolly, doomed victim, now bathed in red light. As the mist touches fleece, laser-shots pierce its shape, Blasting over the flock; the bright mist gives a leap; Splits into four parts while deflecting the bolts From its plasma-like substance; alas for the sheep-- The shots strike it instead, crisping flesh to the bone, Stripping ribs of their cover; wool flies through the air Freed from hide by the heat that makes ichor of blood; The four dark legs crumple; unseeing eyes stare As the quartered mist braids itself; red streamers dance Like smoke-ribbons about the bright shots that would kill Flesh and blood like the sheep, like a man or a beast, But leave plasma unharmed; and the air is now still. A boy lowers his rifle, eyes frowning, intense; Dark hair somewhat astray, as if lifted and tossed By the wind of the plains that the mist-creature rides To the distance to vanish, to sight and aim lost. "Damn it," murmurs the child; then his watchful brown eye Sights two figures: the first one he knows and loves well-- But the second! A tall man, face shadowed, cloak huge, Horse steel-skinned; and his sword-hilt bespeaks a blade fell. "Sis!" he calls, as the two riders rein in their mounts, The gray tossing his head twice by way of a sign Of resentment at slowing-- "Is all well with you?" Doris nods and responds with a single word: "Fine!" At the Lang barn the stranger offsaddles his horse, And the brown-haired young Dan quickly steps to its head: "Let me help--this mount must be terrific to ride-- A DL-4 cyborg!" When no word is said By its rider, his saddle draped over one arm, Dan grips the beast's reins near the bit, holds them tight, And continues, "You don't seem to have much to say. Dr. Fering once told me--I hope this is right--" The rider walks into the barn side-by-side With the boy, who is leading the bright-eyed steel gray And speaks on: "There are two sorts of men who are quiet And generally have very little to say. One sort is the kind who are busy with plots To do wrong to some other, or planning to lure Harmless beings to evil; I know there are such, But you are not like them. I know it. I'm sure. "You must be the second kind: One who is good And knows actions speak louder than words and will say Only what is important. --Your horse is safe here--" In a roomy box stall-- "I hope this is okay." From the door of the barn the tall rider called D (It will pass for a name) now surveys the wide field Watching sheep herded home like some hoofed, bleating cloud. He speaks not; but he wonders what nightfall will yield. : *//////{<>==================- : Once a month the Langs travel to town for supplies. It is thus the scene opens on Doris's cart As it rattles along, D with Dan in the back; It is something to do; indeed Doris takes heart From the newcomer's presence; while she guides the horse, Young Dan sits by their guest, both feet firmly in place On the floor of the cart; but his quick sideward glance At his hero new-found sees the half-shadowed face (That nearly returns it), arms on the broad chest, One boot on the planks and one angled in air. Dan pulls one leg (his left) to rest over his knee, Then his own arms he crosses. The two make a pair. Past wooden buildings, crooked now With age tight-packed, the cart rolls on; At every roof-peak stands a cross, Gray relics of a time not gone. A fountain's music patters loud; The cyborg pony dips its nose Into the water; to an edge Of town square step three figures, those Three very different, each from each: One tall and heavy, oxen-strong With piggish eyes and earrings gold; One weasel-faced, short, versed in wrong; Between them strides one born to lead A jackal-pack or peacock-herd. He downward glances to spit out His cigarillo; speaks one word: "Doris!" Then Doris looks up in surprise, And her blue eyes grow wide as she takes in the sight Of this elegant dandy, his faultless blond hair, Each strand coiffed to perfection, each curl watch-spring tight. White ruffles topped by a round blue stone Spill down his chest, between lapels Of coral-brown, and at his hip An iridescent sheen that tells Its owner's wealth--if not his aim. Brown skin-tight pants wrap slender legs; Their stirrups hold white spats in place, And patent-leather brightness begs That passers-by admire each foot-- But Doris can see none of this. She does not care for costly show; Her keen blue eyes entirely miss The fruits of time his tailor spent Form-fitting seams for hour on hour; She sees behind the ice-blue eyes The face of wanton lust for power. "Greco!" For no other word will suffice; Greco nods: "And perhaps it is true, what they say? I think we should talk--" "About what?" "About that--" And he gestures at D-- "But not right out here, hey?" , =={==========- ` Greco's friends flank an alley's mouth; not far within, Doris stands back to bricks, does not try to pretend To have patience for this: "All right, what is it *now*?" "Dear, you needn't be angry; you know I'm a friend, And you know very well what I'm talking about. I can see by your face--and the choker you wear-- That you can't hide it all: You're to old Count Lee's taste, And he's bitten your neck. You can't hide it--so there!" Doris snorts in disgust. "What to you if he did!" "Now, now, sh," Greco cautions. "You might upset Dan! And that wouldn't do. You're so stubborn, you know. This is one of those cases that calls for a man! You should have called me." (Doris rolls her eyes here.) "I can get all you need, for the mayor's my dad. I could hire vampire hunters--the best!--all you want!-- And instead you've found *that*?! Ah, it's really too bad. This is no situation for someone like you; You're a beautiful girl--I'll forgive and forget All the things that you've said and the things that you've done, If you'll just let me help, like a dear little pet." Greco swiftly leans forward, lips pursed, eyes half closed; Doris meets them indeed--with a hard-knuckled fist. Let the lout learn his place! Greco staggers back, stares: She won't get any younger--it's time she was kissed! "Ow!" He rubs his sore lips. "Why'd you go and do that? Are you crazy?" "Far from it--and not about *you*." "But--but--Doris! I want you--to have what you need. Just a favor! My friendship--and services too." "A favor? No, thank you. I know what you *want*. And what kind of 'service' you think that I need. Keep it all to yourself--all your favors and lies." "Doris, when you're so angry, you're pretty indeed." Greco lunges at Doris, once more kiss-intent. She dodges; his face smashes into the wall. "So you want to play rough!" And he goes for his gun, But Doris is faster; she need not use all Of the powers of her whip; the brown part lashes forth, Unadorned by the magic all strong foes demand. Though gun-muzzle has barely cleared holster it strikes, Knocks the mother-of-pearl from his tightening hand, Then wraps its dull length at his ankles; he gasps; Doris gives it a tug; Greco's arms flail in vain. His feet skid from beneath him, and capping his fall, Alley filth smacks against his luxuriant mane. Then the whip frees itself, reeling back to its place With a whispering whir, coiling tight as it can. Doris slaps it to holster and gives a soft "Hmf!" Then she turns on her heel, to resume the day's plan. Greco's weasel-faced crony regards her return; He peers into the alley, brow furrowed in doubt, And a scant moment later is shoved to one side: Greco, back on his feet, dashes forth to speak out. Cupping hands to his mouth, he shouts into the square, "Listen, everyone! Count Lee is seeking a bride! Doris Lang has been tainted--look under that band! You'll see marks of his work that she's trying to hide. And she hasn't stopped there--see the man at her cart?" Greco gestures in triumph at D's moveless form. "Vampire Hunter! She's hired him--you know what that means!" And in silence that only can presage a storm All gazes converge on D's shadowed blue cloak. Then Dan turns to Doris. "Sis! Say it's not so!" Greco smirks; Doris gives him a look that could kill, Then turns to her brother: "We've places to go." End part 4 Ascii sword by Tua Xiong Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 5 The street was still when Doris drove Her cart to town through dusty ways, While checkers-players whiled away An afternoon of sultry haze. The faded storefronts now survey A crowd that, like a hive of bees, Hums, near the courthouse window pressed, Each ear, each eye, prepared to seize Whatever hint of news may flit; Talk runs from tales of bygone days And old Count Lee to Doris Lang And to the stranger's silent ways. -|---- ----|- His stern and heavy face outlined By muttonchops gone mostly white, Runsilva's mayor sits in state; He wears judicial robes by right, For he has led the village folk Through good and ill; each one can tell Of Mayor Gorman's foresight keen; His guidance long has served them well. They look to him and to those two Who stand by him, to either side: One is the sheriff, somber-clad, Young-faced, yet known as true and tried. The other is a gray-haired man Of stature short and figure slight, With thick-lensed glasses, silver-rimmed, Face lined with years, but gray eyes bright. Physician, teacher, village sage Is Dr. Fering; he is friend To Doris and the mayor both, Unhappy that he must contend With loyalties in conflict now: He must protect the people here, But Doris, with her parents' death, Became his charge, to him as dear As if she were his child in truth; He looks in on her when he can, Although she lives outside the town, Alone except for brother Dan. The mayor speaks: "And is this true, What may be only Greco's guess--" (Here Greco winces) "that you are A Vampire Hunter?" D nods: "Yes." Now Greco grins and Fering draws A short, pained breath between his teeth. It's just like Greco: count on him To act from motives far beneath Contempt and still smell like a rose. Thus thinks the doctor; but it's Dan Who tightly hugs his sister's waist And speaks as plain as children can. "You're cowardly, Greco--you wouldn't speak out If Count Lee came to town to suck everyone dry! You're just mad at my sister because she's got taste And she gave you the brush-off--we all know that's why!" At which Greco goes livid, teeth bared in a snarl, Leaning forward and clawing the air in his rage: "You damn little brat! You'll be paying for this!" But his father says quietly, "Son, act your age." And Greco reins his anger in-- Just barely. "Father! Hear him speak! Insulting me--" "My son, enough. We are together here to seek The truth, not salve your wounded pride. Now go--before real trouble starts." And Greco (with a backward glance That says "I'm not done yet!") departs. "We must uphold our village laws," The mayor says; "With this in mind, Our elders made tradition firm: All tainted thus must be confined." Internment camp! None speak the words, But apprehension on each face Reveals the knowledge they all share Of a half-forgotten dreadful place. The mayor to the sheriff nods, And Doris sees through blinding tears His fingers curl about the chains Of shackles gone unused for years. Dan steps before Doris, his arms open wide. "I won't *let* you take her and lock her away!" Doris gazes astonished at young Dan's resolve To protect her in spite of the laws, come what may. And Fering speaks: "I must agree. That camp's unfit for man or beast, And better left alone; it's gone Unused for fifty years at least." The mayor shakes his hoary head: "You know there is no other way." But Fering leans on Gorman's desk Intently: "I will have my say. Have you forgotten? I have not-- Events of fifty years ago, Why none have gone into the camp For decades now. I do not know How you could risk that history Repeat itself. Perhaps I might Remind you of that time long past. A woman marked with Count Lee's bite Was taken there to be confined. When Count Lee learned what we had done His anger know no bounds; he came For vengeance and killed thirty-one Of our own folk, not sparing age Or youth or strength--I was a child, But I remember all he wrought, The corpses by his touch defiled, Their blood not drunk but left to run From gaping wounds his talons tore. I still can see the staring eyes In broken faces--" "Say no more," The mayor snaps. But Doris speaks Despite full eyes and quickened breath. "About the woman--what of her?" "She soon went mad and found true death." So Fering answers, voice gone grim To tell this; but he will not lie. D breaks the silence: "Will you wait? A vampire's victim need not die Nor be a threat to anyone. Delay until I've done my work. To kill the one who tainted her Will cure this ill. I shall not shirk." "But what if you in fact should fail?" The mayor thus addresses D, But Doris answers: "I shall leave." To which Dan adds: "And she'll take me!" End part 5 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 6 The month's supplies must still be bought; While Doris shops, D waits with Dan, Who sits upon the cart's hard floor And weeps as softly as he can. D sits on one wheel rim, his gaze Upon the cobbles, softly clears His throat: "Dan, hear me." Dan looks up Too fast to try to hide his tears. And at a store some doors away A little group enjoys this chance To gossip at the keeper's desk. The door slides open; every glance Flicks up, then, even faster, down, Or to the side, or anywhere But into Doris' wide blue eyes As she walks in with Fering there Beside her. Sudden silence falls About the counter as the two Walk past, then part, perusing shelves; For most within it will not do To stay for more, and they skulk out In twos and threes; the storekeep stands Distracted from his green-lined books: He's got a crisis on his hands! "Afternoon, Mr. Waytry," says Doris with cheer (And her back to the exodus at the front door). "I'm here for the usual, food for a month-- Fertilizer--some cans of--" "Stop there. Say no more. I'm sold out of everything you've come to buy Or you even might want." Doris whirls toward him, stares. "But you know that's not true!" And then Fering steps in: "As would anyone, Waytry. You've no lack of wares." "But if I have her business, I'll lose all the rest! Look how everyone's gone--and there's cause for their fears. They think that a vampire's a patron of mine." Fering gapes, and poor Doris must hold back her tears. Through tear-blurred eyes Dan looks upon The vampire hunter's blue-cloaked back; The spreading collar, long sword-hilt; The auburn hair, the shadow black His broad-brimmed hat casts far indeed. "Weep if you must," he tells the boy. "More evils wait for both of you; I hope in time I shall destroy The vampire; that is my sworn task. You have a duty in this, too. Your sister needs what you can give: Your hope and strength; it's yours to do The things that are within your power To keep her spirits up; you know What those things are; you know her best. The count has struck a heavy blow Against her, and she needs your smile. Hold back your tears as best you can When she is near, for all our sakes; I need your courage also, Dan." Could D need *him*? Dan longs to ask, Yet, in some way that words can't state, He knows the truth. He dries his tears: Like D, he'll be content to wait. End part 6 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 7 True dark has fallen on the land. As in the town, so in the fields: Tall crosses dot the rolling hills; All know the power that Count Lee wields. And other creatures haunt the night: A jellyfish that swims in air Floats toward the Lang house, meets a field Invisible--but that it's there Is proven by the creature's fate. Steel boxes hum; the creature tries To pass between them; with a *zap*, It's gone. The sight meets Doris' eyes But does not truly register. She might be glad the field's in place To keep the Lang home safe from harm If she had fewer trials to face. Near an upstairs window Doris stands, Regards the night she does not see; She rubs her neck, re-pins the brooch, And turns from thoughts of Magnus Lee To Dan, asleep, bedclothes astray. She tucks him in, eyes full of love. He gently stirs; meanwhile, downstairs D doffs his hat to hang above His blade, upon its guard that rests Against the wall; his face now seen Unshaded seems both mild and grim: Firm-featured, eyes intensely green. He sweeps his gaze about the room, Past stairs and mounted, antlered head To portraits of the senior Langs: A man and woman, both now dead; And fixed upon their own broad frame Beneath the portraits weapons hang, A handgun and a long, curved sword: The relicts of the House of Lang. With great care D lifts down the one He favors, in its dark, slim sheath: Its hilt is not so fine as his-- Before he tries the blade beneath He sees the guard, two flat L-shapes Conjoined, offset; a Cubist snake Of steel, hard in his brown-gloved hand. He walks across the room to take A seat upon a well-used couch. His knees he crosses; steady, now. He pulls the blade a handbreadth out, Admires the steel; he savors how-- "Heeheehee!" It's a voice he's heard often before, And it turns his heart bitter; it's too like his own. "What's the matter with you? You've been acting so strange! Now let's see--" It takes on a school-masterish tone: "You're defending that girl, and I can't fathom why; And that isn't enough--let her take you to town-- Then her brother you treat to a man-to-man talk. Do you have a crush on her?" An ominous frown Has appeared on D's face; he resheathes the bright sword With a click. "That's ridiculous." "Well, that may be-- But she offered herself--she's a virgin, you know-- That should please you as much as it does old Count Lee, Whom you've sworn to destroy. And that's all you can think: How you have to be true to your own blood-stained path." Sword in hand, D now rises and crosses the room, And the voice chatters on: "Don't go turning your wrath Onto *me*. I'm the bearer of tidings you know!" D replaces the sword and examines the gun, Still unspeaking. "You're lonely as any old fiend Who's entrapped in a castle; you cannot claim one Single lover or helpmeet or friend--except me." D pushes the cylinder out of its place And a voice from the stairs rips the web of his thoughts. "There you are," Doris says. D does not raise his face But examines six rounds that he hopes are still good; He unloads them, reloads them, his two brown-gloved hands Moving slowly and steadily; Doris half-sees What he does as she crosses the room, and she stands Near his side; first she studies his features intent, Then his hands; then the portraits that hang on the wall Like two sentinels solemn, or two chaperons Ever-watching: "I wanted to thank you for all That you've done in the short time you've been with us here. And for talking to Dan. He admires you, you know. He's been trying to cheer me." D makes no response But replaces the gun, turns from Doris to go To the window; he pushes the curtains aside. Doris says, "You're a Hunter. My father was, too: A hunter of werewolves; an expert; the best. But he didn't hunt vampires, and he never knew How to fight them. He said that it took special skills That he lacked." She joins D peering into the night. It's not black: overspreading the trees and the fields Is the yellow of moonbeams, a steady, dim light. "D, what can you tell me about our Lord Count?" D studies the sky as if he can foresee His own fate in the pock-marks that pepper the moon Like the patterns in dregs of a witch-woman's tea. "Woman's Moon is tomorrow," he tells her at last. "'Woman's Moon'? Once a month, for a night, it shines red. Is that what you mean?" "Yes; on Woman's Moon night Your Count Lee will not hunt; among vampires it's said Female blood is unclean while its color is shown From the height of the sky: It seems likely to me That he'll seek you before that--and that means tonight. Doris Lang, tell me more of this Count Magnus Lee." Doris pauses, distressed at the prospect D speaks. He might seek her tonight! But she tells what she can. "When the village was built here, he'd ruled a long time In these lands; and among us you won't find a man Who can tell for how long. But his castle was quiet 'Til two years ago. That's when someone saw lights At its windows. We knew that the count had returned With his minions, once more to rule over our nights. And no one can tell just how old the count is. Five thousand, ten thousand--he's ancient, they say." A bolt of heat lightning, engendered in clouds, Dances, flickering; fast through the sky makes its way. It casts hard-angled shadows on D's thoughtful face And on Count Lee's as well, where he sits on his throne In his castle; his craggy chin rests on his fist; His eyes narrow, and then a cold wind starts to moan. "An old one," D mutters, voice half overcome By the thunder and wind. "They gain strength with the years. It is still mine to fight him: that much I have sworn, And no fight is won by succumbing to fears." Not merely wind nor thunder's voice Is heard outside; the hunting cry Of a creature neither man nor beast Draws ever nearer. D's soft sigh Is lost beneath the quiet clash Of curtain rings on metal bare, And coarse, thick fabric takes the place Of Doris' view of chill night air. D dons his hat; the great brim casts A masklike shadow past his eyes. He buckles on his heavy sword; He's heard enough; not mere surmise But certainty is in his mind. "They come," he says. "And I must go." "Then so shall I! Count Lee's too strong For you to fight alone. I know!" "Not Lee himself," is D's reply. "A vampire we might keep at bay With cross or garlic; he will send His werewolves, mutants, for this fray." He tugs the fingers of the glove From his left hand. "So we need more." The leather slips away from flesh. "I must be sure you're safe before My fight begins. Count Lee has placed His mark on you--an outward sign Of power he wields upon your blood, Upon yours acts--it's his design To call you to him through that bond. There's but one way you can resist His summons: in a deathlike sleep: The refuge of the vampire-kissed." He raises up his naked palm, And Doris gasps: it is not white And mapped with lines: a face grins there, Its opened mouth as black as night. Too surprised to recoil, Doris stands gaping, shocked, As the cruel face glides closer, its brush like the wing Of a moth on her shoulder; her knees start to give And her eyelids grow heavy. "But--what is that *thing*....?" D has thoughts of his own, better left unvoiced -- But no time for that now. He must lay Doris out On the couch, gently cover her; let her rest well; And he turns toward the door, forehead creasing in doubt. End part 7 / \ / / The Lang sword \ \ / \ _________________________________\ \/ ___\________ ___________________________________\ (____________) \ / \ \ with "Cubist snake" guard-------> \/ \ \ (not drawn to scale) / / sword ascii'd by Cathy Krusberg \ / Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 8 The werewolf dashes through the fields: Two feet or four, he does not care. He lopes along the dusty roads; His nose inhales the chill night air In snarling pants; a slavering tongue Drools from his mouth; he rears to stand On hind paws at the wooden fence That marks the bounds of Doris' land. A cross-topped fencepost might deter A vampire, but wolf-talons sink Into the upright sun-bleached wood: It's gone as fast as eye can blink. The beast sniffs the splinters; no food for him here. The compulsion that sent him is suddenly gone. He leaps back to the darkness, now using all fours To dash off where he pleases; his own hunt is on! Two more figures approach at a leisurely pace: One a woman on horseback, the other a male Not much shorter than she, although mounted she is. By the moon both look grim and inhumanly pale. The male is Rei Ginsei: his face is well-known As foremost among servants of Count Magnus Lee; His features a mutant's, with stark, deadly grace And a fierceness like beauty for those who will see. In a tunic of gray, be it moonlight or day, Sleeveless, neck and arms fearlessly plunging so low His whole breastbone's revealed, for brave Rei needs no shield: Only freedom to use what his nature can show. On his chest can be seen five stones emerald green, Each with facets that glimmer in moon's dimmest light. They depend from a thong made of leather so long, They swing wildly as Rei leaps or strikes in a fight, Or they clatter and click on the trapezoids thick Of a necklace of silver and cunningly shaped, Tarnished black with the years and as heavy as fears It lies cold, over ribcage and collarbones draped. A broad belt, brass-on-brown, keeps the loose tunic down, And a lavender garter embraces one thigh Over darker gray pants tailored full for the dance Where Rei's partner is death for the low or the high. Topping all a gray flame that no hairbrush can tame, A mane flying as if by a breeze upward thrown: Gray from birth, not from age; and the color of rage Tints a forelock as crimson as rose that has blown In a garden of hell or beside a dark well. A few stray scarlet strands trickle down to Rei's brow, And two gray locks hang free, sideburns graceful to see, As they sway at his nod or fly up at his bow. He steps forward with poise; his soft shoes make no noise: He does not wear the boots that would spur on a steed, But black leather and thin that fits tight as a skin For the death-dance he lives by; what more could he need For the pastime he loves but black fingerless gloves From sharp knuckles to elbows; no paler the sheath That encases a blade that no prentice hand made: A dire weapon that gleams like a snake's venomed teeth. It looks far too short as it hangs at his hip, But now Rei draws his blade; and it's two blades, yet one. In a quick fluid motion he unfolds its length To a long, single crescent: his night has begun! With a hiss the steel boomerang flies from his hand; It meets three cross-topped fenceposts and slashes through each, Then returns to Rei's grasp; now its wielder looks pleased: Let his foes learn the lessons he's ready to teach! The pale horse's rider impassive looks on-- Ramika, proud daughter of Count Magnus Lee. No shyness of youth clouds the visage she shows, For her House is an old one, though young she may be. Eyes of piercing dark blue dominate her pale face; A few locks of black hair grace her forehead's expanse. The rest is pulled back in the golden embrace Of a headdress on which vinelike shapes seem to dance, Gold on bronze, reaching ear to ear, clasping her head In an elegant grasp, from which pendants of gold, Axeman's blade-shaped, hang free from the circles of red Like great earrings just touching her cheeks with their hold. From a gold-on-bronze choker depends a blue stone At the top of her breast, just above a maillot Of a lavender hue, and her arms white as bone, Like her shoulders are bare; her cape, too, is cut low, Outside black as the night or the long braid of hair That flows down her back in a column of dark, But its lining gleams red as the blood vampires share As a family noble; her poise is the mark Of the power she wields as a scion of Lee. She has little regard for bold Rei and his blade: He's a lackey, no more, be his skills what they be, For a noble knows nobles are born and not made. Rei stands weapon upraised and regards the faint glow From the boxes that hum as they give out the field That protects the Lang farm. Rei's thin face barely smiles: To his blade even steel of the boxes will yield. Within, one switch, another, D's upraised hand flips: Outside, the glow falters and then disappears. The hum of the field higher grows, then dies off, So that silence now falls on the visitors' ears. Both Rei and Ramika are taken aback At this turn of events and stand still in surprise. A door opens and closes; a figure steps forth Through a gate, clicks it shut, narrows shadowed green eyes. But Ramika speaks first. "You're her Hunter, no doubt. What a waste! No mere human can hope to defeat Power such as my father's. You're brave to come out In the night--brave and foolish. It's death you shall meet." "I don't seek you, my lady, but only the Count," D replies. "And what business have you in this place?" "What *business*? These lands are my father's domain, And I answer to him, who is noble in race. But I must not be chary toward those who will die: Even you are entitled to one last request. I have learned that my father of late deigned to try This girl's blood--he declared it the sweetest, the best He had found; and he claimed that her beauty was rare. So I came to find proof, and our servant with me. But she's still just a human, no matter how fair; She forgets the respect due the high House of Lee. She not only resists, she has hired a sword, too. She must suffer for that; and she will, she will pay. Her death won't be so quick as what we bring to you." And Ramika concludes with a curt nod to Rei. End part 8 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 9 The mutant steps forward; his blade is now sheathed, And a hint of a smile makes the gray eyes grow bright. "I go by Rei Ginsei; now fear me, my foe, But flee not; rather savor your brief, final fight." He leaps forward, fist first, with a half-snarling cry, And Ramika's eyes narrow, awaiting a kill. Four black-covered knuckles meet D's strong right palm, And the force of that blow freezes both of them still. Then the brown grip grows tight, and Ramika and Rei Let their eyes open wider: the lady from shock, And Rei from pain also as soft cracking sounds Emanate from his glove in a grasp hard as rock. Rei shouts his defiance and alters his course, Swings one leg into action; it ought to connect With a few broken bones, but his foe pivots fast, Executes one maneuver Rei didn't expect: It begins as a leap, but D's power surges forth Like the blast of a storm; it outspreads cape and hair To their fullest extent so the moon is eclipsed From Rei's view by D's figure, now high in the air. Rei Ginsei's a fighter not easily foiled, With his own power of flight to bring into the fray. His right fist leads now; in an aerial joust The two charge past each other, blurred blue and blurred gray. D gracefully lands; as his feet touch the ground, Cape and hair are becalmed to their normal estate. With his power no less but now firmly controlled, Eyes alert, D stands ready to fight or to wait. Rei makes a smooth landing some distance from D; His face shows he's impressed, but he holds awe in check. "Met well, worthy warrior! It were no waste If I blooded or blunted my blade in your neck!" And he draws it, unfolds it with one practiced flick Of a ready right wrist; his eyes once more grow bright As he flings the long blade so it whirs through the air On its own gleaming path in the chill of the night. It spins past D's ear as a lover might tease, Stirs his hair as it whispers a sharp, gentle breath, But behind him and higher reverses its course To perform the next step in its keen dance of death. As it turns so does D, but to reach for the hilt At his shoulder; the guard's barely clear of the sheath When fell crescent strikes sword; as D draws the full length, See the air-blade spin down it, a steel-on-steel wreath. A flick of D's wrist sends the bright whirling blade On a course far from true to its master's intent. Now it spins bolt upright, cuts a furrow of dark In the earth--straight toward Rei! This is *not* what he'd meant! Two blades now oppose him--one whirls toward his feet, And D wields the other, its concave edge down. Rei stares in alarm as two weapons converge: One unmanned, and one followed by D's tight-lipped frown. Rei's blade reaches him first; he swoops down with a gasp To snatch it in motion; grasps ends of the blade So the points turn toward earth and the arc blocks his gaze As D's point hastens closer; first contact is made By blade edge on blade edge; Rei rocks from the force Of the Hunter's sword thrust still aimed straight at his face. He draws down both blades; the sharp point hits his chest At dead center; but Rei has defenses in place. Blood spurts where it strikes; sweat beads grow on Rei's brow. His eyes widen immensely; the sword plunges in Ever deeper--but never goes all the way through. Then Rei's grimace transforms to a confident grin As the long curving blade makes its exit as last From *D*'s back! Blood arcs onto the cloak of dark blue. Now it's D's turn to gasp; he retreats a few steps To withdraw his own sword from himself--and Rei too. Rei laughs at this sport and caresses his blade; D crouches, his free hand clutched tight to his waist. Blood runs through his fingers; he tries not to groan. Rei isn't the first of his kind D has faced. "You are a true mutant--you have--mutant powers--" D at last finds his voice, though it's strained as he speaks. "You can warp space about you--" his eyes close in pain As blood runs from his mouth in a few thin red streaks. Rei smiles almost kindly at D's crouching form. Without haste he approaches and says, "Now you die." He raises his weapon; D raises one hand, Stops the blow; glares at Rei with a glittering eye. Rei leaps back--*impossible*! "Do you not die When blade bleeds you so badly?" --shows unfeigned surprise But still greater anger; as if in response, The blood fades from D's waist under Rei's watchful eyes. Ramika, too, watches; her horse forward steps A few paces, that she may see clearly past Rei, Who crouches, face wary, blade poised to attack. But Ramika speaks out. "Enough now. Come away. He's a dhampire, Rei Ginsei. He must be my kill." "But--my Lady--!" Rei stammers. "Be quiet, you fool. I have spoken." Rei straightens; his voice almost snarls: "He was meant to be mine--but I bow to your rule." Ramika dismounts, brushing dark cape aside For a moment revealing bare arms and bare thighs Above dark, knee-height boots; with a purposeful stride A few steps she advances and then almost sighs. "So you are a dhampire. I've heard of such things: Half human, half vampire--a nobleman's joke. Some few vampires are careless of shame that it brings When in boredom they mingle with commoner folk. So now I must deal with you, blot on the land That you are--first a mongrel, but what is still worse, Vampire Hunter. In spite you have upraised your hand Toward destroying your kin, as if kin were a curse." Ramika speaks haughtily; noble she is: She must uphold her rank and be true to her kind. Yet she somehow feels drawn to this Hunter half-breed-- It's beneath her! Best shoved to the back of her mind. "I don't wish to kill you," protests D once more. "I seek out the count--" "Hmph! You seek out your death! Do you think you'll defeat me, my line of descent?" She moves faster than mortal can draw in a breath. Like Doris, a holster she wears at her hip For her own favored weapon, hand-sized and blood red, A small version of Rei's; this she now flings at D, And it glows as it whirls through the air toward his head. He upraises his sword, and the little red blade Bounces off, splits in three, flying each its own way. One lands in a field and explodes with a flash, Sending up powdered earth; and the next lands near Rei Not two paces before him; Rei must stand his ground, Naked fear on his face; it's a blinding bright blast And a deafening noise--just a trifle too close; The third at Ramika's feet; it explodes last, Blowing back her dark cape though it leaves her unharmed. D lowers his sword. "Tell this much to Count Lee. To the grim world of darkness some creatures must go, And the duty of sending them there falls to me." Ramika's blue eyes return D's fearless gaze. "World of darkness?" she murmurs; Rei catches his breath. He stands silent, but hatred devours his heart: Vampire Hunter or dhampire, this one must find death. End part 9 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 10 Quiet reigns in the Lang house; young Dan lies asleep In his half-tangled bedclothes, and Doris sleeps, too, On the couch; while alone and in silence and dark, D prepares for the struggle he knows must ensue. / *//////{<>==================- \ In the depths of his castle Count Lee sits enthroned, A king reigning in darkness, surrounded by mist That thickens and thins; its shapes form and un-form; The Dark Lord rests his chin on a loosely clenched fist. He looks old; he *is* old, and proud of the years That have made his hair white; it is swept up and back, And cut short, conservative, like his attire: Shirt and cummerbund lavender; long cape of black. He sits on its red lining that drapes his throne's seat, Slick against his black pants above spats of bone white, Paler still than his flesh, like the whites of his eyes With their irises black as the heart of the night. The mist chitters and moves; hoary eyebrows arc up As he takes in a message of unhuman tongue. They are squeakings, not words, but Count Lee understands, And he sighs at the folly he sees in the young. "Rei is impatient; that I know. But now my daughter--why should she Feel moved to stoop in such a way? It ill befits the House of Lee. They must be punished--in good time. But tell me: Why this long delay?" Mist billows, dances, chitters soft-- At Lee's expression, backs away. "A *what*? A dhampire? Very strange. A dhampire *might* have bested Rei... Alone. But with my daughter, too? He must be hunter more than prey. Well, all the better. I am bored. This sort of challenge might amuse, If only briefly. Let him come, Enjoy a fight he's doomed to lose." / *//////{<>==================- \ Ramika strides swiftly through corridors dark, The soft click of her heels flushing moths into flight, And the brush of her cape ripping cobwebs to threads; Her face tightly controlled, but her eyes fever-bright. She slows as she enters a huge vaulted room, Three walls column-lined, but she faces the one That supports a huge portrait, much larger than life, Of the being with whom her own line was begun. For a moment she kneels, then uprises again; With new vision she looks at her ancestor's face, Darkness-shrouded, yet fresh-looking, noble of mien: She owes homage to him, to be paid in this place. "Lord Dracula, noblest of all of our kind, Please forgive my neglect; now I see I was wrong Not to honor you daily with at least with my mind: But I know now--I know this is where I belong. My father forgets himself, lewdly desires For a wife a low commoner, Doris by name--" And her voice nearly breaks "--Thus the blood of our sires He pollutes without thought, bringing all of us shame." Her throat is too tight for more speech to slip through, But her full eyes speak volumes that words cannot say. She only half-hears as soft footsteps approach From behind her: the quiet and quick tread of Rei. He stands a short distance away from her side. "Your pardon I pray if my presence offends. Time it is for you now to return to your room." Though Rei's tone is respectful, his knee never bends. Ramika turns neither her head nor her gaze From the portrait's pale face: "Do you dare command *me*? You forget you're a servant while noble am I, Like my ancestor, true to the high House of Lee." "Not from me do commands come; your father, the Count, Is angry with actions we've taken this night. I have felt his fell fury; he sent me to say You're to rest in your room. Come; it's truly all right." Rei's face shows compassion--a rare thing for him, But on this night Ramika has suffered a blow To her pride--all the worse it was witnessed by Rei. But he suffered the same, and he wants her to know. Toward her shoulder Rei reaches with one graceful hand As comfort or guidance, not raising his guard, But it never makes contact. Ramika whirls fast; Before Rei sees it coming, she backhands him--*hard* With a crack that half deafens him, blinds him as well; Were his frame merely human, it might break his jaw. He stands face turned, eyes lidded; he has little choice But to bear this. Ramika's least wish is his law. "How dare you! How *dare* you attempt to touch me! Feh! To think I've polluted my hand on your skin. I know you aspire to the high House of Lee, And you hope that my father will make you his kin. Bad enough that a human has caught Father's eye; Why he might want to wed her I cannot divine-- But a creature like you! It were nobler to die Than see mortals and mutants corrupting our line." On her heel turns Ramika to end the tirade. Her dark laughter reechoes off columns and walls; Her heels clack like the breaking of solemn-sworn vows, The sound fading, receding through long, cobwebbed halls, While Rei stands head aside and eyes closed from the blow. He's been still as a painting so far as he can, But his own blood betrays him: a slow, glistening drop Oozes out past his lips, leaves a track where it ran. In the silence gray lashes part; then a pink tongue, Long and narrow, point sharp as a dark castle's spire, Slips outward and down to lick up the red streak; The gray eyes glance to those of the House of Lee's sire, But no painting draws Rei; it's to flesh that he looks With his plans for increasing his own powers' scope. Head unbowed now, Rei's thin lips stretch into a smile, And he chuckles, enjoying the rich taste of hope. End part 10 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 11 Dawn illumines the plain that surrounds Castle Lee; Pounding hooves break the silence, strong rhythm and fast, A steel horse at a gallop, its rider's eyes set On the towers as black as the shadows they cast. D's cape and long hair whip about as in flight, Or as if they themselves fear his enemy's lair. The sharp spires seem to rise like some deadly black sun That sends forth rays of darkness to poison the air. As D nearer draws, a new sight meets his eye: There is life on the plain; near the castle are trees: A small forest, a haven of bright-dappled green, A relief from the desert and darkness he sees. In its midst he perceives it as flashes of brown, The warm odor of earth and the sharp scent of yew. The green leaves set aflutter, the branches that sway Soon are past, so his goal fills the whole of his view: Count Lee's castle, a fortress obsidian-smooth, The great drawbridge almost but not quite fully drawn. Far below runs a rapid, a river that foams; D surveys the whole scene in the still of the dawn. So high is the cliff that the river's noise seems Little more than a whisper, a snake's warning hiss. D's hat brim tilts up and then once again down As he gauges the distance across the abyss. The steel horse backs slowly from cliff-edge to trees, Then D urges it into a gallop once more To give him momentum: he leaps, cape outspread, Gliding over the cliff and the water's fierce roar. There is just enough clearance to let him slip in Through the nearly-closed drawbridge; he lands on his feet At the mouth of a tunnel and drops to a crouch, Sight and hearing alert to the foes he may meet. [] o////||::===========================- [] Dark cape wrapped about him, D walks from the light; His footsteps reecho off narrowing walls. The foreign tread wakens the guards of this realm Where the day never breaks and the night never falls. From one side slug-hued lumps of flesh Rise up and quiver, slowly split, Revealing huge pink lamprey-mouths, Fangs bristling round each slick black pit. Upon the other, undead *things*, All human-like, none human-shaped, Slide through the chains that bound them once. On some, a hint of skin is draped, But many seem more bone than flesh. They shamble, some with bare-skull grin, Some toothless, quivering mouths a-drip At living flesh they long to win. They creep or roll or stumble forth And make the way more narrow still: A path of jaws and teeth and drool And bones and rotting flesh until From beneath the brass horns of his broad, heavy belt, D draws forth a round stone, and it glows in his hand, Not with heat, but with brightness to rival the sun's, Shining blue-hot and blinding; the sternest command From Count Lee himself could not cause such a scene. The lamprey-mouths swallow themselves and draw back; The shambling things stagger, collapse or retreat, Or explode into maggots; all thoughts of attack (If these creatures have thoughts) are abandoned for flight Amid screeches of terror and wailings of dread. One creature lies frozen, unable to flee, And D's striding heel crushes its soft, worm-like head. At the end of the tunnel D gazes about; Behind him, the terrified gibberings fade. The stone he tucks into its place once again, Frees his hands for the fight that in time will be made. He's warned by a chittering cry from above That his challenge is met; he whirls, drawing a knife. Almost in his face are the slit-pupilled eyes Of a lithe, bat-like mutant that lusts for his life. D's short blade meets another; the mutant glides back To poise itself, chuckling, as D's eyes take in The knife-flyer Gimret, of thin hostile face With blunt teeth, hues of purple and gray to the skin. Wing-membranes extend from his arms to his hips Where a long loin-cloth flutters, and on his round head Is a tight-fitting cap; he disdains other clothes, Any armor or shield for defense; in its stead Are shining sharp blades at his ankles and wrists, And he dives with a cackle, then pivots in air So an ankle-blade whispers past D's cheek and eye: Yes, it misses--but just by the breadth of a hair! Gimret readies himself to attack once again, But now D draws his sword; Gimret laughs in his flight, Flaps upward and backward, then downward feet first; Now behind a stone wall, he is lost to D's sight. Then a growl splits the air, shakes the stone walls and floor, And another head rises whence Gimret has flown-- That of Goreim, a golem twelve times a man's height. He might guard Count Lee's castle by main strength alone, But he too wields a weapon: his upraised left hand Grasps a boulder; its fissures breathe yellow-white flame That struggles to burst from a magma-hot core With an eagerness even a golem can't tame. Goreim flings it; fire flows like a comet's bright tail, Streaks directly toward D, who leaps quickly aside And crouches, enwrapped in the folds of his cloak, No further, and no more securely to hide From the blast that ensues; he does not turn his back To the hot wind that carries sharp, flaming debris, But he wraps half his collar just under his eyes To protect nose and mouth; soon enough he can see Through the tatters of smoke and the uprisen dust. In the wall is a double door twice his own height. D tries it; it creaks and swings in at his touch, And he steps back, expecting an ambush or fight. But the door is unguarded; D peers side to side And steps through; it is quiet, uncrowded and dim. His boots click on the stone as he makes his slow way Ever forth down the passage that beckons to him. It is broad, broad enough that his eyes barely see Its far wall; and the end he cannot even guess. "D," his hand softly says, "you know, this *is* a trap." And a few paces later, D simply says, "Yes." End part 11 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 12 On a ledge not too far above D's wide-brimmed hat There crouch creatures of stone: no two are the same. Some are heavy like lions with anteater heads; Some are more like the dogs that men use to hunt game; Some are serpent-like, tails sliding over the edge; Some snarl with teeth long and sharp, ready for strife. One seems smaller and plainer than all of the rest, But when D steps before it, its eyes glow to life. A gray wraith, a mist cat with great yellow eyes, Leaps forth with a snarl that a banshee might shriek. D whirls at the sound and again draws his knife: Let the fell creature learn what his hard steel can wreak! The mist cat impales its own breast on D's blade, But with no ill effect; the steel causes no pain In this gray stuff: it's spirit, not flesh, blood, or bone, And D sees this is no mortal foe to be slain By his blade; his left forearm he raises to guard. The mist cat recoils, then leaps forward, mouth wide. Although spirit it be, when it worries D's flesh The red blood rushes out like an incoming tide. This is more of a fight than the mist cat expects. It flows backward, at last rests its feet on the floor And regards D, still snarling and poised to attack While D clutches his punctures, a full bleeding score. Again the beast snarls. "Damn you," D murmurs low; He dislikes losing blood, though the wounds will soon heal. He first ignores pain, and then hearing and sight: What he seeks he must find by his own inward feel. "There," he murmurs. "A sage!" Now he runs toward the wall; With one fist, then the other, he strikes at the rock. It cracks and then crumbles and finally parts-- The mist cat leaps toward him, though too late to block Or even avenge what the Hunter has wrought. Its form fades as D steps through the ragged-edged hole To stride toward a broad doorway where two figures stand: The one is Rei Ginsei; the other his goal: The sage! Or the witch, as most people would say. She looks quite inhuman, with wild orange hair On a hag's face; her pupil-less, strange-moving eyes Can enthrall with a glance or destroy with a stare. She is not of this world, nor perhaps of the next; She does not stand but hovers; a candle-flame ring Surrounds her; she clasps her pale, long-taloned hands, And she smiles, as one brimming with greetings to bring. But Rei Ginsei speaks first. "Wayward, wavering wight! You cannot love your life, if your lot leads you here." Then the sage says, "Meself, I'm impressed, of a truth! Ye might have but one arm--were ye not a dhampeer!" "For my part," Rei rejoins, "it were more joy to me If our swords we unsheathed, soon to settle our score. But my master Count Lee thinks it meet that you make Your way elsewhere--it seems he has something in store." Rei flings his wild weapon; it whirs through the air; Not at D, but encircling him, acts as a cue: The floor under D crumbles, as if a trap door Had been sprung to expose an abyss to his view And indeed, to his person--the weapon flies back To Rei's hand as D falls among shattering stone. He moves quickly and flings up his great wing-like cape: On the cliff-edge he hangs by its corner alone. He starts to climb up it; Rei moves faster still; With a snarl throws his blade so it cuts a half moon From the cliff where the cloak's stubborn triangle clings; Some would say that swift death were a kindlier boon Than to plummet head downward among such debris, But D's cloak wraps about him: he's still now, resigned; Face placid, arms folded, as if the abyss Were the one thing he knew he was certain to find. End part 12 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 13 In the dark castle's bowels are caverns of stone. D's eyes slowly adjust to the unending murk: Here roundness pale, there zebra-stripe: Who knows what evils in darkness lurk? As a counterpoint to the drops that drip From stalactites high to dank pools below Comes a sinister laugh from D's hand--"Heeheehee! It's amazing, the places you manage to go!" D's vision clears: Now he sees the skulls And ribs, like barrel-staves bleached to white. Many skeletons lie here--truly dead? The hand-thing chuckles. "Now, wasn't I right? It *was* a trap--and here we are!" D's boot-toe nudges a ribcage bare. The skull topples over; the ribs collapse To dust that falls through the fetid air. "Well? Isn't it scenic?" the voice demands. "And historic, too. These bodies fell A millennium past, in the last great war. It's a nice place to visit--except for the smell!" D strides through the emptiness cold and dark, Cape wrapped about him, the only sounds The drip of water and his footfalls soft. He notices little of what surrounds: The sleek, slick walls that barely gleam; Bones everywhere, except for those Now dust; D follows the gentle slope Of the floor, so each step ever-downward goes. D at last gazes over a lake immense. In the air above it he thinks he sees Dark slender threads flow from floor to roof. They tremble as if in a wayward breeze, But the air is still; D steps slowly forth; His boots meet resistance subtle, cool. The water speaks softly; louder far Are the notes floating over the limpid pool. He looks up from the shallows that cover his feet Across the still waters; three forms appear, Tall female figures: these are the source Of the siren-sweet music that D can hear. Each wears a necklace of adder's fangs Almost as pale as her fair, fair skin. Each bears a lyre, and each strokes its strings To music as sweet as the deadliest sin. Dark locks flow down past shoulders bare Between upright breasts, over rounded thighs, To trail the water; no covering more Parts their naked flesh from intruding eyes. Their eyes are the color of long-dried blood; Their lips are as red as their teeth are white. The three draw closer, while near D's feet Curl delicate tendrils as black as night. Three beautiful faces smile as one. "Who are you?" they ask with their lips so red. D stands in silence, regards the three With a face that reveals neither hope nor dread. "Won't you answer us, dear?" ask the three sweet tones. Slowly D gazes upward, at last to say, "But who might *you* be?" And three smiles respond: "Why, dearest, we're creatures that want to play!" Their eyes grow narrow--then glow bright green! At the light D winces but stands his ground. The smiles grow broader, reveal long fangs, And the beautiful faces shift from round To flatter and flatter--from human to snake! The creatures laugh and saliva drips From writhing tongues with tooth-sharp points, From the keen brilliant fangs and the snake-thin lips As six eyes, not glowing but now bright red Plunge straight toward D, who cannot retreat, For the tendrils in water, the tendrils in air, Enwrap both his ankles, entrapping his feet. He gasps too late as the lamiae laugh; From behind and before him the tendrils rise. The hair of the creatures who rule in this place Like a whiplash encircles his calves and thighs, Then his arms and chest, so his sword hand lies Clenched, helpless, bound; he can but surmise What may be in store as in vain he tries To writhe free; but the bright, unblinking eyes Only laugh at his struggles, and these soon cease. Between tight-gritted teeth, D says, "So I see What you are." And they laugh. "Oh, look well, look well, While you can, while you can, on the fateful three!" "We'll savor this one," one of them laughs, As their hair, like a fakir's rope, uplifts D's stoic form, so that eye to eye The three admire him, as each face shifts From snake to human to snake again. "We shall have his strength, we shall have his life; We shall drain him slowly and drain him dry-- What a change in this place where death is rife!" And they weave about him, at first in play, And then in earnest the three entwine Like Maypole ribbons their scaly trunks And the floating strands of their hair so fine In a net, in a web, into tender toils; They long for life-force--not drawn by teeth, But by sharp slick tongues that caress D's face As the three form a thirsty, reptilian wreath. End part 13 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 14 At the Lang home, Dr. Fering stands Before the window, gazes out Into the night, at Doris' side, While she looks to him with a frown of doubt. "You need not fear," Dr. Fering says. "His body and will are like tempered steel; He *will* come back; but I fear for you, And for what it seems you have come to feel...." Doris turns to glare at the dark outside, Profile brave as a man's and twice as grim. "Doris, don't!" Fering cries. "He's a fine young man, But don't *think* of falling in love with him! His heart is good, but mark his eyes: They seek out danger, death, and strife. For him there is neither rest nor love: He has spent too long in a fight for life." There's a question behind Doris' gentle look, But it's never voiced; Goreim's giant form Appears at the fence, and attack on attack Follows fast and strong as a deadly storm. Goreim's stonelike hand reaches forth to crush A barrier-box as a man might squeeze An overripe fruit so the box explodes With a clap like the breaking of ancient trees And a shower of sparks; Goreim barely smiles. Doris gasps, as does Fering; both turn away To arm themselves, just as Dan appears On the stairs with his gun, bound to join the fray. Never one for finesse, Goreim thrusts his head Through the Lang house wall with a spray of glass. Fering fires his handgun at point blank range Into what seems a rust-colored stone-hard mass-- Goreim's massive face; Goreim gapes his jaw, Thrusting forth his tongue; on its keen point rides Little Tula, a mutant dwarf-sized, green-hued, With a pocked cushion-hump on his shoulders that hides In each hollow a spider, and forth at his whim, Sailing over his flat skull and sharp-pointed ears They fly on their webs; Fering's bullets go wide Of the round bulging eyes and the wee mouth that leers As Fering's face vanishes under the siege Of a hundred red spiders on cheeks, forehead, eyes; Quite forgetting his gun, Fering claws at the horde, And past Tula and Fering the swift Gimret flies Straight for Dan, whom he grabs by his gun-arm and lifts, Holds him up like an angler's prize catch in the air; Doris' rifle is cocked, but before she can aim, Rei has worked his own trick; twisting space, he is there At her back, and he grabs her as Gimret did Dan. Doris howls in alarm, whips her head left and right, But in vain; Rei smiles at this bloodless coup, Won almost before there was thought of a fight. And he speaks to Doris: "My Lord Count Lee Waxes weary of waiting; I work but his will When I claim for his keeping and kindly care Your sweet self--so you may just as well be still." Rei holds her so high she need not look up But glares at him levelly: "Rei, it's enough That you come here for me--Dr. Fering and Dan Aren't involved. Let them go! Leave them out of this stuff!" Rei smiles somewhat musingly. "I'm not so sure. My mates matter to me--and they like raw meat!" Gimret licks his lips as he sniffs Dan's arm; Tula grins at the thought of a tasty treat. "Let them go!" Doris shouts "--or I'll die, I swear! I'll bite off my tongue, and I'll bleed to death!" And she thrusts forth her tongue, nearly into Rei's face, Clamps her teeth down on it; he draws a breath And recoils, dismayed, with a silent scowl. The bright hopes that he cherishes fade and dim: The conniving bitch! This is so unfair-- That his future should hang on a young girl's whim! "You're to come unscathed, by the Count's command. Gimret, Tula--release them!" And then aside To Doris: "Your manners need minding, my dear. Do at least try to *look* like a Dark Lord's bride." End part 14 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 15 Doris looks at Count Lee from before his throne In a cavernous hall filled with drifting mists. She has come as he wished, and she now stands still As if willingly brought; but her hands are fists. The vampire's eyes return her gaze; He smiles a trace: "You need not fear That harm or pain will come to you; Your place is in my home, my dear. And by tomorrow you shall be Of my own blood and my own kind: A vampire noble and my wife, For yours is beauty rare to find." "I'll be *gone* by tomorrow," Doris snaps, "And not in the sense that you have in mind! You've laid your plans, and you've brought me here, But it's one thing to plan--and another to bind!" "I like your spirit," Count Lee says, Still smiling slightly, "so I must Forgive this outburst--for your charm. I think perhaps you choose to trust Your Vampire Hunter for his aid." The smile is gone. "Well, look and see. He is not far, and he has learned How fools may fare in Castle Lee." The mists flow together to form a wall Like a tapestry woven of thick, dead air. It shows the image of moveless D Bound fast in the toils of the lamiae's lair. Doris gasps at the sight, clapping hands to mouth, And she nearly sobs as she cries out, "D!" His face is in shadow, his body entrapped In the coils and hair of the lustful three. "They drink his life-force," Lee explains. "A human would be long since dead. But he has been there half a day." Lee smiles: "The sisters thus have fed. Such silly creatures." Lee's hand waves Dismissal. "And I mean all four. They *are*, you know. Your Hunter friend You think a man, but he is more. I should say less: He is a fool, This halfling who invades my realm. If he were to his being true He easily could overwhelm The creatures who enthrall him now. He has some power in my domain, Which is the night: You need not frown At that, my dear; I shall explain: Like oil and water, ill and good Uneasy lie when forced to mix: One rises; therefore one must fall, Despite their vessel's foolish tricks. Thus is his nature: he resists His stronger half, though he might die Without that strength--pretentious fool! To hunt our kind and thus deny His very being. Hypocrite! He merits only shame and scorn. He tries to seem what he is not: Not human, he, but dhampire born." "A *dhampire*!" Doris nearly screams As if a viper's venomed teeth Had sunk into her bosom pale To fasten in her heart beneath. "But how--but how--he's kin to *you*?" "Yes," says Count Lee, face once more grim, "But distantly, and on one side; The fruit of some Dark Noble's whim: A half breed, neither fish nor fowl, And probably a bastard, too." Lee smiles. "So wrapped up in themselves... I think it's picturesque--don't you?" But Doris sobs, "No! It's enough! Make it stop!" She cannot close her eyes to the forms in the mist Of the slavering three and the unmoving D By the cold coils embraced, by the gleaming tongues kissed. But the vision blurs, either hers from tears Or the mist itself that dissolves to gray. With the image gone, Doris' eyes are freed And close to despair she turns away-- Meeting Count Lee's gaze; it draws in her own As a serpent enmeshes its helpless prey Within loop after loop of its tightening coils Till the dark of its throat ends the foredoomed fray. No mortal could hope to resist his power: Doris' knees give way as her eyelids fall. She collapses forward; a single tear From her lashes flies through the air of the hall As if seeking to flee Count Lee's embrace. He steps forth resistless to catch the form That sags in his arms; he savors the touch Of flesh that holds promise, alive and warm. "I love you, Doris; this I swear. Tonight I cannot drink your life. But when the moon is pale once more Tomorrow, you shall be my wife." End part 15 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 16 Far below, in the murk of a cavern dark Three ecstatic faces croon and sigh. "What a feast we have found! Now I nearly fear We'll exhaust ourselves ere we drain him dry!" The three laugh at this as they bob and weave, Half drunk on a life-force exotic, rare, That flows from their prisoner still unmoved, Arms and legs entwined in their tight-coiled hair. D knows his strength; it has not run dry, But his will has been drained by the three who seek Wanton pleasure; his whole frame trembles now, And his last sane thought is that flesh is weak. His eyes grow wider, their green eclipsed By a flame-blue glow as his lips draw back, And a growl escapes past the lengthening teeth He no longer can check, for they ache to attack. His eyes now narrow; his jaws gape wide: As a hawk might stoop, so his head dips down. Twin fangs sink deep in a lamia neck, And the blood sprays out in a crimson crown. The lamia shrieks as her blood spurts forth, And her sisters gasp in alarm and dread. Meanwhile, far above, in a silent room, Doris lies pale and still in a canopied bed. From its side proud Ramika looks down at this girl, This low human the high House of Lee soon will claim, And she thinks, "My stepmother? That's what she'll become If this wedding occurs--what unbearable shame!" A death-shriek flies over the cavern's broad lake, Now clear of the strands that the lamiae wield, And a severed head lengthens from woman to snake As at last its appearance to nature must yield. | 0{XXXXX}+======================> | D stands on the shore, his mind once more his own, Vision clearing at last so he sees the grim sight That his sword and his teeth and his nature have wrought, The vast, ruined remains of the just-finished fight: Huge snake carcasses slashed through or mangled to shreds, Roiling waters stained crimson with lamia blood, Dank air thick with its scent, and its taste on his tongue, Honey-sweet, rich as wine--and as welcome as mud. His skin crawls at the chuckle his left hand emits. "You're so slow to admit it--until you've no choice. You at last show your fangs when your blood knows you must." D's face grows grimmer still at the symbiot's voice. "That's enough!" D snaps sharply. "You give me no peace!" "Don't blame *me*--it's your blood. What you are, you must be. It's your nature, your fate--stop the futile pretense That you're human. It's pointless. Accept yourself, D." D does not deign to answer; more pressing concerns Must be tended. Again he is deaf, he is blind To the cavern, the bodies, the richness of blood In the air; what he seeks, he must seek with his mind. | <======================+{XXXXX}0 | Ramika's frown has grown more stern Regarding Doris' sleeping face. The girl is lovely, that is true; But it is not a human's place To enter thus the House of Lee. "Ah, Father mine! Why is it I Alone who sees the shame in this?" Ramika mutters. "She must die!" And from her belt Ramika draws A gleaming dagger; holds it high, Poised like a snake prepared to strike With eager and unblinking eye. But a crash from behind her announces a guest-- And she whirls as the double doors burst open wide Before D! "You!" she snarls with a murderous glare. He leaps forward, half crossing the room in one stride, Grabs Ramika's knife hand; for a moment they freeze, Locked by eyes and by hands and by some other force That Ramika finds draws her; their shared blood, no doubt. Her glance flickers to Doris; no trace of remorse Taints her gaze; it is drawn back to D once again. The dagger flies free of her grasp, hits the floor, And then so does Ramika, and just hard enough That she curses D's boldness--but essays no more. Doris lies unmoving as D swoops down, Scoops her up, flings her onto his shoulder in haste, Head foremost, so her bare legs sway over his back, And her long braids hang free, nearly down to his waist. He dashes down corridors black with their years, Through passages narrow, through cavernous halls That widen to space filled with catwalks and murk, So huge that it seems to lack ceiling and walls. Through this cluttered abyss Gimret flies with his laugh, His four knives streaking silver; D raises his sword. Gimret slashes, then dodges--but not fast enough, For D is not slowed by his slender young ward. Just above Gimret's loincloth the point of D's blade Cuts through lavender flesh--and the organs beneath. Gimret screeches and stalls, one hand clutching his wound; Bright blood gushes alike past both fingers and teeth. Gimret swoops, gains momentum, retreats on one wing In a cramped, awkward flight; to the darkness withdraws. D has scarce made a step when another weird laugh Sounds before him; the sight would give anyone pause. Little Tula stands bold on the catwalk's slight width. He is short, and his four teeth are dull as his wit, But his great hump is filled with his tiny, fierce friends. They are quiet with him, and they patiently sit Till he signals them, flattens his long, pointed ears; Then the spiders spew forth from his hump into flight. Hundreds hurtle toward D in a writhing red mass, But he shows no alarm at the terrible sight. D slips off his left glove as he lowers his blade. Toward the creatures he raises his naked left palm With the face that's his tormentor, sidekick, and friend. It regards the red horde with unnatural calm, Then it opens its mouth, and no hurricane's force Could push air half so hard as the mouth pulls it in. It sucks down every spider and each trace of web To itself; briefly chews them; concludes with a grin. Tula stares at this, staggered, then groans in alarm, Whirls in terrified flight; D's blade flashes forth, swung In a swift downward arc; Tula's split carcass stands For a moment suspended, like butcher's meat hung. Then the halves part and fall in a spatter of gore The whole width of the catwalk; D wipes his blade clean, But keeps it at guard; likely more foes await. How this labor may end still remains to be seen. Ever onward D dashes, the rapid tattoo Of his boots on the stone like the beat of a heart That fears not for itself but feels dread nonetheless For a love who would forfeit her life should they part. End part 16 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 17 Now down the broad passage the mist cat once kept, Through the double doors set in the high, heavy wall; Through the tunnel's wide mouth so the creatures awake, But with proof that his stone has not yet cowed them all. Side by side in strong shackles three thin figures hang; Their six eyes come alive with a dull yellow glow. The three mouths barely open to stiff, lipless slits, And from each slips a spirit as pale as the snow-- As pale and as cold but more deadly by far: Like the mist cat they swoop; like the mist cat they bite. As D runs, their sharp teeth draw his warm, living blood So it spatters the floor on the path of his flight. D narrows his eyes, but his steps never slow As he raises his sword, growling, "Back to your place!" The pale wraiths don't deceive him--his blade pierces one So it shrieks, and the mist slips to show its true face, For that shape housed the sage! Now the wraith-form dissolves As the sword slashes through the red mass of her hair, Lops her brain clean in half, so her essence leaks out; Her skin shrinks like a lung slowly emptied of air. A great rag with a human face leaflike floats down In two pieces: the sage will work magic no more. D's steps fade in the distance; so fast is his pace That in silence the body and hair meet the floor. At last there is light; D would sigh with relief If his lungs would permit; they're on fire from this flight. He grips Doris tighter; toward freedom he runs, And the sunshine so painfully, wondrously bright. The incline is steep, but his steps never flag, Nor his clasp on the burden he gently must bear, Nor his grip on his sword--there's the end of the bridge, Where D leaps--and is halted, pulled back from midair. D gasps, his eyes widening; swift turns his head To see Goreim, who growls at him, "Going somewhere?" Goreim's grip on D's ankle would hold a mad bull, And it draws D back down like a tightening snare. D snarls softly; his lips curl to show his white teeth: He *will* *not* be foiled here, not with safety in sight. He upraises his sword, drives its point forward hard So it pierces the hand that has halted his flight. Goreim roars as a gout of his blood spurts high. He releases D, rising; and D rises, too, As does Goreim's left hand, with a boulder of flame In its grip: where it falls, no small blast will ensue! D again wields his sword, this time not on his foe, But upon the great cables that hold either side Of the drawbridge: Snap! Snap! Amid creakings and groans Of inanimate outrage, the bridge long and wide Starts its fall with a jerk; D stands crouched at its end, Rides it down, his long cape and wild hair flying free. Goreim loses his footing and falls at full length On the bridge, arms outflung, so his great hands flank D. Swiftly down, swiftly down, in a broad arc they fly: D poised on the bridge's thick, fast-plunging lip; Goreim prone, clinging one-handed as they descend While the fire-boulder sputters and flames in his grip. Only inches from impact D leaps from his perch. When the bridge hits the ground, Goreim roars at the shock, But D barely can hear him; the boulder explodes In a great burst of flame and a shower of rock. D crouches against the hot gust of the wind That blows back Doris' braids and his own auburn hair Till at last through the heat waves and slow-clearing dust He sees Goreim--the golem's great shout splits the air. It is more like the scream a volcano might vent Were it given a voice to cry out in its pain When it shatters itself with the force of its blast So its magma spews forth, falls like boiling hot rain Or like blood from a shoulder bereft of its arm Out a fountain of arteries--thus Goreim bleeds From the wound his own missile inflicts at close range. Now deprived of his weapon, he nonetheless heeds His fierce instinct to fight. His eyes balefully glare; He bends down, gapes his jaws, shows a tongue like the sting Of a scorpion, tensed to attack with its point, But D wields his sword first, not a flesh-slashing swing But a stab that runs through Goreim's tongue to his throat, Then pitches him backward: now dying, now dead. Rei arrives at the bridge as the golem's great form Crashes down, so he barely avoids Goreim's head. Rei gasps, "Goreim!" incredulous; how can this be? Was his mighty friend felled by a mere dhampire's snare? Could a half-vampire vanquish a golem's great strength? For what seems half forever, poor Rei can but stare. Then he comes to himself; more than ever he knows He must hunt down the Hunter and see to his end. Rei pursues at a run, footsteps skidding in blood; In pursuit overhead there glides Gimret, his friend. At the end of the bridge Rei stands still and intent; Eyes searching, ears listening, he scans the dense trees: Leaves rustle, a horse neighs: Rei lets his blade fly Toward the bare hint of movement he's sure that he sees. Again running, he follows the swath of his blade. It has cut man-thick trees here; it cannot have failed. Sure enough, the track ends where the blade pinned its mark To a tree: Gimret's corpse hanging bleeding, impaled. "Gimret," Rei murmurs, shaken. The Hunter is gone, The wood once again quiet; no sound but the drip Of the slow, morbid blood Gimret's heart lately pumped That flows down his still blades and falls off each sharp tip. Rei's head bows for a moment of grief for his friends. First was Tula: Rei saw the pathetic, halved form That the Hunter's blade left; then great Goreim so maimed His blood puddled like living lakes, steaming and warm. Now the knife-flyer; Rei had seen Gimret half soaked In his blood; it was then he had learned of D's flight. Gimret bound his own wounds, had continued to serve Their grim master; and Rei feels remorse at his plight. Rei upraises his head, tosses back his gray hair; Narrowed eyes view the home that for now he must shun. "I shall not rest a night in the castle, the keep, Till that dhampire is dead and my Dark Lord's will done." / *//////{<>==================- \ Dreams in darkness, in mist; visions merge, melt, and dance: D's caped, shadowed, still form that the snake women tease; Count Lee's grim, craggy face; and red spiders that fly; And throughout all a voice: "Sis! Sis, wake up now--please!" Doris wakes with a start and sits up in her bed. "Dan! Thank God you're all right--and I'm home! But where's D?" "Right outside. He's amazing! He brought you back safe From the castle--I thought that you'd never get free! And he went straight to work once he got you inside-- Now he's fixing the barrier fast as he can. I'm so glad that he's here--I'm so glad that you're home-- And I'm going to be like him when I'm a grown man!" End part 17 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 18 Where tavern lights shatter the young evening's dark, A high-stepping horse trots Runsilva's main street. The crest of Lee gleams on the carriage it draws, And heads turn at the sound of the clattering feet. Eyes grow wide as they take in the black plumes and crest; Murmurs shake the night air: "What's *it* doing in town?" The sharp hoofbeats are stilled at Runsilva's one inn; Every face stares aghast at what grimly steps down. Well, *almost* every face. One redheaded and pert Rubs against Greco's arm. "We don't want to stop here!" "No!" exclaims a brunette clinging tight to his sleeve. "It's so early--we're not going to stop at one beer!" If Greco hears, he gives no sign; His eyes and ears alike are fixed Upon the inn, his thoughts awhirl With greed and cunning intermixed. He shoves the flanking belles aside. "Go home!" he snaps. "I've things to do!" The redhead nearly hits the ground; The brunette shouts, "The same to you!" Between them now a third is seen, Revealed by Greco's sudden flight. She adds her voice: "You jerk!" "You queer!" "Grow up!" "Good riddance--and good night!" The taunts fall onto empty air, Their object gone into the inn Across the street; its heavy door Shuts out the beauties' furious din. At the inn's front desk stands the shivering wreck Of the manager; even so much bright gold As Rei put down for a single room Is not enough to preserve his hold On sanity shattered beneath the stare Of the servant of darkness, whose silence is worse Than the howl of a wolf or the roar of a lion Or the voice of a magus intoning a curse. Greco slaps his palms on the inn's front desk. "Hey, manager! Service! Or can't you hear?" "The C-C-Count's messenger--" "Yes, I know. Shit! I don't have time for your stupid fear!" One hand yanks a broad lapel aside, Digs deep in the manager's flashy coat, Through pockets perhaps better unexplored While whimpers leak from the captive's throat. "I've got to use the monitor room: Where's the key?--Aha!" Fingers close on steel. The lapel is released, and the nerveless form, Eyes shut, hits the floor that it cannot feel. The monitor room and the mayor's son Are long-time friends, its video screen A familiar sight as it whines to life And dissolves from dark to a homely scene While Greco slips a cassette in place To record what may come to see or hear. He puts on headphones, seats himself At the CRT--where he gulps in fear At the sight that flickers and sometimes rolls On the dim old screen: Rei's humble room With its cracking plaster and sagging bed, And its one bare bulb to dispel the gloom-- Just a bit too well for Greco's taste. There are creatures best neither seen nor heard. Two such appear in the room (and some Might claim that Rei makes a fitting third). A dark-robed figure as tall as Rei Confronts him; its cowl reveals a face Not of flesh or bones but a mass of tubes That leave neither mouth nor nose a place But surround black craters that might be eyes-- Caverns full of the night or of fathomless space. Close by, cape-clad and with wide-brimmed hat Stands a silent figure of gnomish race. Rei looks a bit daunted but still stands erect In the face of a being that no blade can slay And its small, warped familiar; if they seek his death, They will find it, and easily: such is their way. The messenger of darkness lacks Both nose and mouth, yet breath it draws In hollow hisses, like the sound Of parchment raked by dragon's claws. It speaks in tones as deep as death. "I come here at Count Lee's command To seek his foremost servant out For motives you will understand." Rei replies, "The wrath of a ruler royal I fail to fear; it were wrong to flee From pain or punishment: shame alone Has led me far from Castle Lee. No surprise that you seek me, but that you are seen Is a worrisome wonder; your ways I well know. You deal death in the darkness and do not delay Lest the wary, forewarned, seek to ward off their woe. My lord is my law; by his leave do I live Or to death am doomed by his dark decree. I foresee no forgiveness for failing my guard So his enemy fled and intended went free." "Of penalty," the cowled head says, "Count Lee spoke not; he only said That you had cause as much as he To wish the Vampire Hunter dead, And toward that end he ordered me To give you this." Now in its hands Appears a salver; thereupon A plain but mystic weapon stands: A candle burned to half its height, The wick a crumbling bit of night, With wax-drops leper-pale bedight: Naught of this earth should gleam so white. Its base clings hidden in a cup Inlaid with vinelike shapes of gold. Black iron, top-turned, its handle stands: A crozier for a dark priest's hold. Rei breathes a half-whisper: "The Mandrake of Blood." He had thought it a myth--or long lost to time's wear. He feels its dark magic: No mere candle this, But a poison, and almost too deadly to bear. Gray eyes grow wide and thin lips taut: Rei seldom comes so close to fear. "What weapon this for wight to wield? No mage am I, but mortal mere." "Your fears are groundless," says the thing, "So spare us all that look of woe. You need not be a witch nor mage To use this tool against a foe. The bearer of the Mandrake-lamp Is proof against its light or flame. A mortal, mage, or vampire true May wield it hurtless all the same. No vampire else may bear its light Without dark magic's shielding charm. All vampire-tainted veins its slows, And noblest blood feels greatest harm." Rei knows it; he has heard the tale As something of the distant past. But *use* the thing? He hesitates And ponders; then he speaks at last: "By mightiest magic the Mandrake of Blood Through the scent of its smoke or the sight of its flame May an old vampire slay or his bite's victim slow, But to work death by spells is a warrior's shame. Though edge fly in error or point fail to pierce, I take pride in the path of my bright, burnished blade. I would win without witchery, honor upheld, Or else fall as my due and face Death unafraid." "Count Lee knows what is in your heart; He says if you fulfill this task As he envisions, he will grant The Noble blood: You need but ask." Rei blanches, blushes, nearly starts To tremble, and his pulse beats fast To see his life's most treasured hope Within his reach at long-sought last. He seldom sets scruples so quickly aside As when thought of nobility cheers and consoles. "That damned dhampire's death and a Dark Lord's long life: With the Mandrake of Blood, I shall gain both my goals." , =={==========- ` "The Mandrake of Blood." Greco murmurs the words As he watches Rei's grasp seize the iron cold and black. Little more than a thought lights the wick, so it seems. Blue eyes narrow, prepared to pursue this new tack. End part 18 Ascii sword by Tua Xiong Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 19 The great mist-creature floats between trees, over rocks, Seeks its prey: man or mutant, with four feet or two, It cares not; the air cracks with a laser-gun's burst; The red mist swoops and coils as no bird ever flew. Dan fires again, but into four It parts; each quarter floats its way. Dan runs, pursuing; gasps and halts; Looks up, his eyes reflecting gray. _|_ _|_ _|_ _|_ | | | | | | | | At intervals tall crosses stand, Fence-uprights, weathered hearts of trees Made stout against the elements, Their height outstripping even D's. He gazes on one, green eyes shaded and grim. From behind him come Doris's hurrying feet. "D, I still can't find Dan! Have--?" but Doris stops short. At the sight of Dan's rifle, her heart skips a beat. "Dan's gun," she murmurs. "But up there?"-- Suspended from the cross-beam high. "He's been taken hostage, it seems," D observes. "Taken *hostage*?" says Doris. "For goodness' sake, why?" With a soft noise of tearing, D pulls down the note That a whitethorn spike pins to the gray, weathered wood. He reads it in silence. "D, what does it say? They took Dan?--Oh, I know it's not anything good!" But she snatches it, scans it--or rather, she tries. "What is *this*? I can't read it." "And few enough can. It is called 'The Assassin's Tongue;' vampires and worse Know it well. Count Lee's servant--the mutant--has Dan." "The count's servant? But why? I'm the one the count wants, Not my brother--not Dan." "This is not Count Lee's deed," D explains, "but Rei Ginsei's. He waits for me now. I must meet him alone to see Dan safely freed. He wants us apart--and he wants his revenge." "But Dan!" protests Doris. "Why not just take me?" "No, indeed," D replies; "to use you as a pawn Would dishonor the name of his master, Count Lee." "Dishonor!" cries Doris, and loud thunder rolls As if Nature condemns what the Dark Lord has done. "Count Lee is a monster, like all of his kin! Speak of honor--and vampires--in *two* breaths, not one!" Then her voice chokes itself; her hand flies to her lips, But too late; some small part of D's feelings may show In his half-downcast profile; he lets silence fall A long moment, then quietly says, "So you know. I am dhampire, half breed of the Dark Lords you hate; While you think me no more, your doubt rightly remains. But I stand by my vow, and I will not recant, Though the blood of the Nobles runs dark in my veins." "D," Doris says softly, "I didn't mean you. You've proven your honor to me and to Dan. I trust in the strength of your brave Hunter's heart, And I know you can help us if anyone can." /> O[\\\\\(O):<============================- \> The cyborg's black hooves pound the broad, barren track: Behind, dust uprises, earth startled to flight; Before it the rock stacks grow tall in D's view. His eyes narrow: a place chosen well for a fight. <\ -============================>:(O)/////]O ==================- \ Doris sits alone in her silent house Huddled close to herself, face bathed in tears. The cares of her heart overflow into speech, Though unheard and unheeded by even her ears. "Oh, Dan, please be safe ... if he fails ... if you die .... How can D say I'm guiltless? No sister could be, When her enemies take her own brother instead--" Then a voice interrupts her with: "Doris! It's me!" "Dr. Fering!" she cries, and she leaps to her feet, Sudden joy overwhelming her heart and her face. Fering calls, "Let me in!" Doris turns off the field; Lets him in and is caught in his gentle embrace. Her tears flow anew. "They have Dan--they have Dan!" Fering holds her. "I'm sorry--there's so much to do. A patient was ill, and I couldn't delay. It isn't enough that Count Lee molests you-- Now your brother is gone--it's so very unfair That you have to endure this--but keep being strong. I've found a new hope for you--safety in sight-- I'll explain on the way. Doris, please--come along." \ -==================<>}%%%%%%* / Dan clings to a corner of D's long blue cloak, Half behind it he watches, eyes fearful and wide, As Rei writhes on the ground, stump clutched tight to his chest; Blood pumps out with the rhythm of life's restless tide. Rei's voice is hoarse with anger and pain: "You magicked the Mandrake--my Lord would not lie! What warrior witchery will--" "You are wrong. You sought to use witchcraft--*you*, coward; not I. You held but a copy--the semblance of power, With no place in our contest and outside the code Of warriors' honor; of blade against blade-- A mockery dark that your master bestowed. You sought to use magic, instead found disgrace--" Rei rasps in return, "Is a warrior's way To add insult to injury? Mock a man maimed? Hunter halfbreed, shame to the words you say!" Rei's voice and vision alike grow dim, Gaze not on the foe that he swore would be killed, But on Dan on the ground, a reminder to Rei Of a second dishonor: his word unfulfilled. End part 19 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 20 Sheer rock to the right; to the left a descent Of jagged-edged stones from a mountain's cold heart. Inbetween runs a path--broad enough, but no more-- For the passage of Doris's pony-drawn cart. In the lanterns' light, Doris holds the reins, And to her companion she says, "Is it true?" Dr. Fering nods. "Yes, indeed," he replies. "I have seen it myself; soon enough, so shall you. In the town an old man has been telling the tale Of a house half-forgotten; upon its stone wall Ancient symbols are carved in a glyph that defends Against vampires and any dark force they may call. It will shelter us both while your Hunter saves Dan, And he will, I feel sure." Doris nods. "So do I!" Then she widens her eyes at an unwelcome sight And must muffle her scream to a low, startled cry At "--Our own Dark Lord's daughter!" as Fering exclaims: On the road stands Ramika, her form wrapped in black. Doris tugs the reins hard, loudly calling out, "Whoa!" Fering says, "Turn around! Now we've got to go back!" "There's no room!" Doris answers. "We have to go on! And if that means a fight--" Her hand moves toward her hip, But Fering outreaches her, takes what she seeks; Doris gasps at the loss of her energy whip, But before she finds words for her outrage and shock, Fering snatches her cross--the chain snaps at her chest-- In a gesture that catches her decolletage And pulls it down, too, from a single fair breast. "Dr. Fering!" She clutches her dress into place As he leaps from his perch--an unnatural bound For a man of his age--and how smoothly he lands! Then he chuckles and turns, looking up from the ground. "I was--until yesterday," Fering replies. His canines grow long, and his eyes bright and wide As his collar falls open to give the last proof: Two great chewed-looking wounds he no longer need hide. Doris stares, then sobs: "Oh my God--not *you!*" Her face falls to her hands; cold coils of despair Streak their way through her veins, spiral tight in her chest, Crowd the hope from her heart as they make it their lair. Fering turns to Ramika. "And why are you here? I alone was entrusted with serving Count Lee In this matter--to bring him his own chosen bride." But Ramika says stonily, "Bring her to me." Fering bows obeisance: "As my lady wills;" Then turns to Doris, his tongue's sharp end Flicking over his lips; Doris helpless sits And weeps at the loss of a trusted friend. Fering climbs to lean over her: "Lovely you are, And your rich maiden's blood is so hard to resist. How blind I have been--and how cruel is my lord. If I took a few drops, they would scarcely be missed. He wills that you come to the castle unharmed; He has promised me blood if I only obey. But--why should I wait? You are here and alive." He leans closer, lips moist, when Ramika shouts, "Hey!" She has listened, repulsion and shame at his words Giving way to fierce anger as nearer she draws. She clutches the shaft of a keen whitethorn spike; Before Fering can do more than open his jaws In a shriek of protest, the sharp point seeks his heart With a movement too fast for a human to see. The force of the blow flings him down from the cart To the yawning abyss and its lining of scree. Poor Doris cries, "Doctor!"--alas, far too late. "Doris!" Fering calls back, voice now cracking and pained From the blood-gushing wound that indeed seals his fate And from sorrow--his former awareness regained. Doris sobs his name, but her voice is drowned By the rattling roar of a rockfall's end To an agonized howl--an inhuman sound Of farewell to a treasured and much-loved friend. Ramika's feet skirt the gorge's brim. Doris weeps, face in hands, unaware of her foe: "The doctor--and Dan--oh my God, and *him*--" Grief surpasses her words, choking off their flow. Ramika climbs up to take Fering's place. "*Him*?" she echoes, eyes hard as her upraised blade. "That dhampire, you mean? He's a lesser disgrace Than the lust that my father will not see stayed." Her dagger shines in the lanterns' light. Doris makes no move: "Death is not the worst. My father taught what I know is right: To each mortal's end, honor must come first. With my brother gone and the blame to me, I have no more reason for life or pride. Use the knife as you wish: better death to see Than mix blood with the Count as a Dark Lord's bride." Ramika looks stunned, scarce believing her ears; Her blade she now lowers and sheathes; no need To shed blood of a human so lacking in fears And whose very words echo the proud Nobles' creed. "My father has caused this--no blame falls to you. You should flee--and you must!--far beyond his dark reach. Once you leave his domain, he lacks power to pursue--" From before them a light shines, curtailing her speech. Both gasp; Doris stares at the red-white glow, But Ramika winces and covers her eyes, Bows her head to her knees, then flings it back With a moan of pain, as she vainly tries To escape from her agony, mouth gone wide. Teeth gleam cat-sharp; lashes try to cling Together, but the red rays push them apart, Showing whites fringed black as a raven's wing. "Ramika!" cries Doris, too stunned to do more. The young Noble's struggles grow weaker, then cease For a moment; her eyelids are lowered at last, But some spark in her being denies her release So soon from the pain of the magical rays That suck strength from her body and light from her eyes. Her lithe form twists, sideward falls at last In a merciful faint, head on Doris's thighs. The light draws nearer both moveless forms, Doris too overcome to do more than stare. All is silent now but the footfalls soft Of its bearer, eclipsed by the shimmering glare. Then the candle is lowered, its bearer revealed To be "--Greco!" gasps Doris. He laughs. "But of course! And just look what I've got! It's the Mandrake of Blood. If you need to fight vampires, you go to the source. You see," he explains, "the old legends are true: A vampire can't move when entrapped by its light." He approaches the cart, and his voice fairly gloats: "But it's better--she seems to feel pain at the sight! Well--I think it's time that we saw the Count." "Greco--what in *hell* are you talking about?" "Why dear, it's so simple: his daughter is bait. If he knows that we have her, he'll soon be lured out-- And into an ambush, because I'll have this! When he's helpless, I'll kill him--just wait and you'll see. But I have a condition: You'll be at my side: We'll conclude Count Lee's death with your marriage to me! We'll rule the whole region; that vampire's domain Will be ours--can't you see that our fates are entwined? We'll both be remembered forever for this--" "Greco," Doris says dryly, "you're out of your mind." Greco does not hear; he now stands on the cart, Nearly pushes the light into Doris's face, And she winces, recoiling: "Please--don't! It's too bright!" "Now, don't be so shy of my tender embrace." And he comes closer still. "It's not too bright for *me*." Doris cannot move backward nor even aside With Ramika's dark head on her lap. Greco says, "Don't you worry--I'll care for you, once you're my bride." Then the young Noble's form draws his roving blue eyes. "So this is the daughter of Count Magnus Lee." The candle moves lower, as does Greco's gaze: "She's not half the monster I thought that she'd be. She's pretty, in fact--even up close like this. I'm surprised Mother Nature saw fit to endow Her form with such beauty." The form's eyelids twitch, And Ramika finds strength to half sob, "Kill me now!" "Ooh, look!" exclaims Greco. "It *is* still alive!" Ramika's dark eyes remain closed, overcome. The pain of mere speech makes her voice cracked and hoarse, But she forces out words: "Coward! Kill me, you scum! It's better to die than a prisoner be To filth like you." "What the fuck did you say?-- Little bitch from hell!" "I said, Kill me *now*!-- Or I'll kill you later--with your life you'll pay!" "Then kill you I shall!" Greco's voice is a snarl. His free hand brings a stake near the candle's bright glow. "I can lure out the Count either with you or not." And he raises his weapon, but Doris cries, "No! She's helpless!" But Greco says, "Perfect for me! There are some kinds of insult I don't have to take!" Doris flings herself forward and over her ward-- So her torso lies first in the path of the stake! "Doris!" Greco exclaims, but his speech is cut off By his own cry of pain as a laser-gun's blast Knocks him into the gorge with a flash and a crack. Dan yells, "Doris! It's me!" Luck is with her at last! Dan runs toward the cart, still with rifle in hand. Doris looks up, astonished. She'd lost hope to see The sight that now greets her--it's not only Dan, But the tall cyborg horse and its cloaked rider: D! End part 20 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 21 A site of such bloodshed is best left behind. Stars shine in the sky over mountains and plains; A broad lake reflects them, and close by its shore, The cart travels again, Doris holding the reins, With Dan at her side, as was Fering of late. D's cyborg keeps pace with the pony's slow course, And now double-mounted, Ramika astride Before D; her head nods with the gait of his horse. Her eyes are unfocused: half-lidded, gone dull; Perhaps from the Mandrake's unnatural light, Or perhaps from reflection on all she has seen; Or protecting her heart from the pain of her plight. D's great dark cape enwraps them both: He means it as comfort, a shelter to share. Ramika feels only a captor's embrace; Still weak, she can only pretend not to care. "Even Dr. Fering," Dan says at last. Doris answers, "I felt certain you were dead too-- And our Hunter. I nearly wished death for myself. I'd have nothing to live for if I should lose you." "Doris!" Dan exclaims. "You can't say things like that! It's just like D told me--you know it's not right To give up when you're sad. He says no matter what, It's like making a promise. You finish the fight." In that moment Dan seems as courageous as D, Resolve strong as the Hunter's, and Doris says, "Dan--" But then stops; words fall short of what stirs in her heart At the thought of her brother's becoming a man. | --==/////////////[}}====* | At the star-flecked lake, on the sandy shore, The cart and its pony unmoving wait. Close by stands Ramika, gaze level, eyes still: She endures like a Noble, resigned to her fate. "It's not far to your castle," D says from his mount. "Go home now." Ramika first stares in surprise, Then asks, plainly shaken, "You won't kill me yet?" She has spoken to D, but it's Dan who replies, "Of course not!" He glares at her, crossing his arms. "You need a good reason before you should kill." Doris' mixed feelings show in her face and her voice As she adds: "He's a Hunter, with vows to fulfill. That means helping the blameless sometimes, in their need. You have left me unharmed; he does likewise to you." But Ramika replies, "And so simply I'm freed?" She looks down for a moment. "Indeed, it is true: Unlike are our ways as are sunshine and night. We too have our honor; we too have our vows; But your strange human notions of wrong and of right Come from feeling unlike what our nature endows. We do not know mercy; we do not share love. We feel only hunger; we learn that our place Is to feed and to conquer: The rest we're above, For our role is to rule what is human and base." She falls silent; her gaze wanders over the three Whose loyalty drives them to actions that fly In the face of cold reason: Especially D ... For he cares. And it hurts. And she doesn't know why. "Only hunger and rulership?" D says at last. "These are far from the words of the Noblest and First. If your Ancestor heard that a Lady spoke thus, You know it would shame him. He'd soon think the worst." A startled Ramika, voice shaken, eyes wide, Asks, "But--how can you know what is *ours* to obey?" D's quiet green gaze meets and steadies her own. "We share blood, little sister." No more will he say. End part 21 Ascii sword by Tua Xiong Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 22 The loudest sound throughout the house: A quiet hiss where Doris showers. Her body she can soon wash clean: What she has suffered these few hours Clings in her thoughts like vision-stains: The horrid lamp that Greco bore; Ramika's pain; Ramika's knife; The mad look Dr. Fering wore; And Dan endangered, nearly lost Because of her, then saved by D, The Hunter whom her words so wronged, Who rescued her from Castle Lee. She feared him dead not long ago, But now she fears to face those eyes... Yet longs to; just to *be* with him. The night she's come to realize How brave he is and yet how kind; How wrong it was of her to speak In anger; so she vows to make Amends, and his forgiveness seek. With day-clothes bundled in her arms, Her hair, still moist, remains unbound; A simple robe enwraps her form; Her feet are bare and make no sound As Doris pads from room to room. In one she softly calls out, "D--? I'm finished, if you'd like to now--" And stops. It's empty. Where is he? He had been lying on the couch, Eyes closed in rest; perhaps in sleep, But now--her feet and hands grow cold, For fears and doubts are quick to creep Through blood gone thin from care and theft To niches they have come to know In years of worry: desert lands Where trust has not had time to grow. In panic Doris casts about For any hint; again she calls His name: "D? *D!*" with rising voice. For half a moment silence falls: The latch clicks; wood resounds on wood, And Doris does not try to hide Her fear, but gasping whirls to view The door--and D, now back inside. He stands with sword in hand but sheathed, Eyes shadowed by his hat's broad brim And unconcerned; but Doris runs Across the room to speak with him. He wonders at her worried look: "What's wrong?" he asks; she shakes her head. "Not wrong--oh, D, I'm glad you're here. And after all the things I said, I wouldn't blame you if you left. I'm sorry. You've been more than kind And brave. I owe you thanks--not *that*." D's tone is gentle. "I don't mind." "D--please. I'm so afraid for you. My father--may he rest in peace-- He hunted werewolves. That was not Enough. The village would not cease To press him to fight vampires, too. At last he did; at least, he tried. He couldn't; and the vampires laughed, And at their hands, my father died. I don't want you to end that way! There's too much fighting--please, let's go To someplace you won't have to fight." D's eyes are sad as he says, "No. I can't--we can't--do such a thing." "But D--why not?" "For honor's sake, If nothing else--both yours and mine. And it would be a grave mistake For you. You would despise that life." "I wouldn't, D! And if you stay, You might--" Her voice attempts no more; Words fail; but tears will have their say. The bundle falls from Doris' grasp, Forgotten as her arms are pressed Before her face--but more than that: She leans on them, on D's broad chest. A startled D looks down at her And somehow stammers, "Doris--don't--" With face downcast, she shakes her head. "Don't say that I should go. I won't!" Her hair flows down in golden waves, The shoulders of her modest dress Half-covered by those silk-soft tips That beg some caring hand's caress. A quiet sob bestirs her locks, And like a curtain drawn aside A few slip forward; these conceal The marks of Lee's intended bride-- Show other fair and radiant skin, Its warm and smooth expanse unmarred By flaw or choker; D stands still But breathes through teeth clenched far too hard. His face grows taut; his eyes go wide And roll to show broad fields of white, Blood-emptied; now the flame-blue glow Behind them kindles at the sight-- And can he smell what flows beneath? He dares not turn away; she'd fall Or worse--look up! He tilts his head Far backward; all his pain and all His passions rip a jagged route From heart to throat and force a groan Past teeth that lengthen, sharper grow: Is power of will enough alone To curb a nature meant to rage, Devour and slay? How strong can be Against that tide one silent hope: <> A woman's heart can feel the pain That chivalry and courage hide. However great her own distress, Such truths refuse to be denied But make their own way from one breast to the next, Waking instincts as strong as what vampires must heed. Doris speaks, face concealed, but voice tender and clear: "I care for you, D: Take the blood that you need." The strength behind those gentle words Calls out to an embattled soul; Green eyes can see the world again; Behind them is a mind made whole Once more--but shamed and numbed with shock That loosens one strong, brown-gloved hand And frees the sword to clatter to The floor. D never hears it land. His arms seem to impel themselves To pull her close; he longs to dare Let flesh touch flesh; let ungloved hand Adore that soft, unfettered hair. Denied such humble human joys, He savors still the shred he can: To hold her form against his own And for a moment be a man. He must not tempt himself or fate And draws on all his inner strength To grasp her shoulders, push her back-- Away! If only one arm's length. At such a gesture Doris gasps But makes no protest. She can see Upon that shadowed face the ghosts Of pain and care; they pause, then flee As D at last regains his breath. His heart slows, and a final sigh Escapes the quiet, calm facade That lust and longing underlie. How can he even face himself--? Much less his hostess; but he must And does, though shamed by wide blue eyes That look to him with utter trust, Despite the dangers in his veins That innocence might well abhor. She murmurs, "D--" He speaks a hoarse "Forgive me" --and can say no more. / *%%%%%%{<>==================- \ Cloak-wrapped, D lies upon the couch. He knows the house has been made fast Against the night; his eyes fall shut In quiet dark. Alone at last. "Ah-*ha*!" It is the symbiot's voice. "Alone, indeed. It serves you right. You're neither vampire nor a man. What sort of misbegotten blight Is in your veins? She's offered both Her maidenhead and blood to you. You can't just crush your instincts Into dust. You scorn the woman, too." D silently winces; the creature speaks on: "You're a *dhampire*; why must you act so untoward? For the son of--" And D is at last moved to speech: "*Never* mention that name! Damn your eyes! Where's my sword?!" "Hmph. You know what to do when your left hand offends. Oh, lie down, you great oaf! It's your loss if you wreak Such a vengeance on both of us--don't cut me off At the wrist! I'll be silent--until you can't speak." It never was a thing to lie; And D relents: ah, let it stay, Pronounce its omens; they may prove Prophetic ere the dawn of day. End part 22 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 23 A battered Greco slowly limps A riverbed long dry and dust Between tall cliffs, and in his hand The unlit Mandrake. "So my trust," He says, "was not at all misplaced. I'll try again another day. Right now--" and Greco stops and stares. Before him stands a figure: Rei! One arm is bandaged, plainly short; The other bears the fang-curved blade. Rei's jaw is set; his gray eyes glare With anger that will not be stayed. "Reaving wretch!" he snarls. "You shall rob no more Once I've worked my will." Greco cries, "Please--wait!" "That I won't," Rei replies. "This keen edge craves a kill; Nothing short of that bath will its bloodthirst sate." | --==/////////////[}}====* | D's eyes fly open; some half-heard sound Pulls him back from the brink of uneasy sleep. He arms himself quickly and steps outside, Drawn from rest by the call of a vow to keep. His eyes are narrowed, his mouth concealed By collar-ends crossing like blades that fight. Grass muffles his footsteps; no other sound mars The silence and peace of the fields at night. Then before him light blooms with a sudden blast. The noise rocks the ground, sets his hair into flight, Casts long black shadows that tremble and stretch; Smoke rises in billows of charcoal and white That become suffused with a sickly red. D gasps in pain as if struck by the sight. His collar flies open from the rays' dark force, So his face is exposed to that alien light. He half turns away, the flame of his eyes Death-pale in the glare, all his weapons' array Made useless; a sound now reveals who bears This thing: the triumphant laughter of Rei. D rasps a curse: merely drawing breath Turns his lungs to fire, takes strength from his knees: Like venom the smoke of the Mandrake of Blood. What tries to be speech slips out as a wheeze Past a hand that attempts--too little, too late!-- To block nose and mouth from the scent and feel Of magic to torment the blood in his veins. D has drawn his sword but can only reel And lean on the blade as on some beggar's crutch, Point dug into the ground; Rei draws nearer still And laughs once again: "Yes, my lord lied not; You won well before; now I work my will!" The light so close is a blinding force. D writhes at the pain, but the power is fled From his hand; unheeded the bright sword falls, As does D himself, to lie still as if dead. Well does Rei know the ways of the vampire-kind, Be the blood transformed or bestowed by birth. The appearance of death may indeed deceive, Lest a whitethorn spike pin the heart to earth. With one cautious toe he turns that form So its placid face would survey the skies If it could; and the Mandrake he lowers to ground; Ruddy shadows are cast on the lidded green eyes. "Merciful man, you let me live, But I fear it's a favor I can't return; Your head is the price of my heart's desire-- Noble blood to buy; life eternal to earn." Rei pulls from his pocket a whitethorn stake, So near--oh, so near!--to achieving his dream. He plunges it down with a warrior's strength; Blood leaps high where it strikes; an impossible scream Emerges from jaws unlocked by pain Of a heart that propels the whole body to rise As no corpse ever should; rigor-stiff but not still With its open and glowing but colorless eyes As some essence jets from the mortal wound. Rei keeps his distance and holds his breath: Will a mere stake defeat such a force as this--? But the dhampire falls with the stillness of death. | --==//////////[}}===* | Ramika, in darkness and quiet, alone, Gasps and clutches her chest as if stabbed to the heart. Her knees give way: Blood has called shared blood Through a power that refuses to gently depart. | *==={{]//////////==-- | Rei glares at his stump with a snarling laugh: "My debt to you, dhampire: and promptly paid." D's left hand he props on his knee with his stump, Lops it off at the wrist with one stroke of his blade. As a fist it flies free, shedding streamers of blood; Rei follows its course with indifferent eyes, Then smiles to himself; revenge may be sweet, But still sweeter the sureness of winning his prize. Silver streaks plummet down; first a few heavy drops That build to a torrent of rain where D lies. Cool rivulets stream down the unmoving cheeks; The roar of the rainfall commingles with cries From somewhere, from nowhere: "D, please--*please* don't die!" Doris' voice may be real or a dark fever dream. Dan's impassioned speech: "D, you've got to live!" Is half-drowned by his sister's despairing scream. /| ________________ O|===|* >________________> \| Ramika, kneeling, at last looks up; Looks on darkness and silence. Her pain has fled, But weakness remains, with an odd sense of loss-- Almost grief, and she murmurs, "That man ... is he dead?" End part 23 Ascii swords based on a design by Tua Xiong Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 24 Robed figures file through the gloomy depths Of the castle dungeons; they do not care That Dan lies unconscious and helpless nearby, Brought by force but abandoned at the vampire's lair. | --==/////////////[}}====* | The clouds have passed, and the cold moon shines On slithering mutants not worm nor snake That eyeless creep, mouths black and wide With sharp teeth eager for prey to take. Another thing moves on the soggy ground: A pale, clenched hand, more blood than wrist Where it ends; fingers twitch, uncurl, open wide; Give a flutter and then an impossible twist Onto tips of fingers that spiderlike crawl On the mud, through the grass, making scuttling sounds. Then it halts, and the palm somehow raises itself So a keen-eyed face can survey its surrounds. Through gaps between blades it at last sees its goal: Blue cloak, auburn hair, face pale and still; And the fingers crawl through the damp once again, Over short grass that bows to the symbiot's will. + O========|===========================- + "Such willfulness does not become A daughter of the House of Lee." So speaks its master from his throne. "I beg you, Father, hear my plea." Ramika's eyes are wide and moist, And she continues: "It is wrong, Such degradation; I have voiced Objections, for I love our long And noble past. Can you not see-- The girl is a commoner, low and unfit To wed to a Noble; this match must not be!" Count Lee is unmoved: "Her life will flit Away and quickly. I shall not Retain her ever at my side. I shall in time grow tired of her; Destroy her; seek another bride. That is my right as Noble lord. You know that I am master here; Why do you question?" "Father, please; Can you not understand my fear? We are as noble as our house; If that should fall, then so shall we, Deserving; an ignoble spouse Befouls the lordly name of Lee. It is sooner, not later, the woman should die: I shall kill her myself, for she tempts you too much. She is joy to your tongue and delight to your eye, But your lower yourself by consorting with such--" "Enough, my daughter. Hear me well. This cannot harm the House of Lee. I know: Ramika, *you* were born Of mortal even such as she." Ramika's eyes go wide with pain; Her mouth grows slack, her vision dim. The ringing in her ears drowns out All thoughts but one: <> Oblivious to his daughter's shock, Count Lee speaks on: "Ten thousand years And more have I seen slowly pass. You must not let your youthful fears Deceive you. You are far too young To know what ancients must endure Through ceaseless, endless centuries Of slow, dull time. I seek a cure For boredom that is worse than death. A human woman is a toy, A silly creature, full of life. But thus are mortals: They enjoy Their little lives because we rule, Control, protect: They lack our strength. And is it not a Noble's right To take what pleases? Ah, the length Of time I have neglected that!" He rises. "Do not think it ill That every fifty years or so I have my pleasure and my will." Preoccupied, Count Lee walks past; Ramika cannot even turn To watch him; something in her heart Is nearly shattered; who could learn That all her cherished Noble's pride Was based on lies and still stay sane? She has not heard a sentence since, But one brave hope will yet remain. Despite full eyes and aching throat, She speaks it: "Say it isn't so-- My mother was--" Count Lee replies, "A common human. That I know." Ramika whirls; her scream of rage Reechoes through the cold, dead halls. The mists recoil, and shadows shake Against the old obsidian walls. She springs; bright tears flow down her cheeks Unheeded; thoughts of kin or kind Cast into darkness; vampire-like, The urge to slay enwraps her mind. Count Lee half turns; the ancient power That burns dull red about his eyes In midair meets Ramika's form And flings it backward; stunned surprise Flits past her face and then is gone With consciousness; her eyelids close. Her body hangs impossibly Upon a tower of smoke that glows, Supported by a Dark Lord's art, Not easily nor soon defied; And Count Lee speaks: "Despite your blood, In truth, you have a Noble's pride, But that is not sufficient cause For arrogance beyond your place. I will not have my wedding spoiled By your unseemly lack of grace. Stay there a time and learn restraint." And thus he leaves her: helpless, still; Suspended like a side of meat, Remainder of some butcher's kill. <\ -==========================[]88888] > It says, <> Rei's aching heart agrees. What other chance? How long can be A mutant's span in such a place, In service to Count Magnus Lee? The hope is gone; its ghost departs, Breathed out, a whisper: "Fifty years?" And for the first time in Rei's life, Those hard gray eyes are touched by tears. End part 24 Ascii sword by Tua Xiong Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 25 The symbiot has made its way To D's blue cape that lies outspread Beneath its master as he lies Upon the ground: He should be dead, But vampire-stuff is slow to yield To mortal weakness; fingers crawl Upon the fabric: back until Wound touches wound, one bloodied wall Against another: long apart, How can they join? And yet they do! Smoke rises from the thin red line; The smoke fades; and the line does, too. The symbiot lets out a sigh. "Oh, my, that's better. *People* roam, But I belong here where I am." Its fingers wiggle. "D! I'm home!" It raises up its arm (and D's) And laughs in triumph--then it sees The mutant worms--and less at ease, Looks farther up: A sight to freeze The blood slips from behind the trees: The plasma-beast! It seems to tease The leaves; below, in twos and threes, Worms hunt; the creature rides the breeze, Then swoops, attacking. One bold worm Rears serpent-like, its blind fangs bared But useless. Mist surrounds its length. No fragment of its flesh is spared By hungry red shot through with bolts Like lightning. "Quick!" exclaims the thing That shares D's hand. "I've got to move! I'll need more strength if I'm to bring Us both to safety!" And it dives To earth; but soon its grasp is raised, Palm filled with dirt. A munching sound, Like beasts that chew what they have grazed, Emerges through the soggy soil That disappears, consumed as fast As that weird mouth can gulp it down And sate an appetite so vast. Twice more the creature grasps and chews And gulps; then belches, half content. The mist-thing still devours the prey That writhes within its plasma-tent. D's symbiot first clasps its fist, Then opens wide both jaws and grip, Inhales so deeply D's long cloak Flaps wildly in the winds that whip Their way into the creature's mouth, Sucked in by supernatural greed-- Or desperation. Even as The symbiot has filled its need, The plasma-creature shrinks and grows. The worm is gone; no hint remains, Not even bones; not one spare scale Is left on earth that no blood stains. The symbiot regards D's chest. "Oh, shit. A stake. We don't need *that*. So let me pull it out--" (it does) "--And you'll be fine in no time flat." It hovers, listening for the heart That ought to heal itself and beat. Instead it hears the swift approach Of glowing plasma; quick retreat Is not an option. "Damn it, D! I sure can't fight that thing alone! Get up! Get *up*! It's spotted us!" And panic cracks the symbiot's tone. It makes a fist that pounds D's chest. "Beat, damn you! Move! And save our lives!" Its blows could fracture human ribs. The plasma-creature hovers, dives; Surrounds D's form with bolt-shot pink. D's eyes go wide, flame-blue and fierce: With speed beyond what nature grants, The sword is grasped, and quick blows pierce And slash the mist-stuff: it explodes, Then stagnates; its remains descend As smoldering chunks of dried-blood hue, And thus the creature meets its end. "Too *fucking* close," the symbiot says. "Oh, D, for goodness'--ditch that frown! What would you do without me, now?" "Rest better." "Yes, and six feet down." "Shut up, you excrescence." "Not this time--not yet. You've barely escaped from an unworthy grave In the maw of that *thing*--but you always want more. Get your ass on your horse: you've a woman to save." End part 25 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 26 Dan crawls within a length of pipe Not tall enough to let him stand, And at its end he clambers out And leaps, then climbs, hand over hand Among a maze of smaller pipes Like some vast, monstrous jungle gym. He never thinks how creatures dark Might like to make a meal of him Nor heeds the inky depths below. One goal alone is in his mind, And sometimes softly spoken: "Sis?" She is his duty: He must find What Count Lee seeks and bring her back Or die still trying. Pipes abound. They break the space, they block his view; Sometimes one makes a ringing sound As Dan descends its crusty length. Below, he sees the creatures dead And dark-robed in a solemn train: Count Magnus Lee is at their head. Beside the vampire, arm-in-arm, Walks Doris; neither hate nor fear Betrayed in stride nor pose nor face, Despite the black-clad form so near Her bridal white. Her eyes are huge And open, yet they do not see How strait and narrow is the way She travels with Count Magnus Lee. Dan balances with outspread arms: More treacherous than any rope The pipe he walks; but from its end He sees distinctly one last hope: The catwalk is not far below. "Sis!" Dan exclaims beneath his breath. The leading pair draws level with The boy, who readies death for death. A short but sturdy length of pipe In hand, Dan grits his teeth--then springs! His raging battle cry and blow Aimed at the chief of undead things. Dan's aim is perfect; but Count Lee Has worked a mighty warding spell About himself, remains untouched; Dan bounces off, defiant yell Transformed into a panicked scream. Like tiny mirrors, Doris' eyes Reflect the form that arcs away, But no dismay and no surprise Disrupt the pallid, tranquil face That turns to track Dan's helpless flight A moment, and then stares ahead With pupils like a starless night. Dan tumbles through unfathomed space, End over end, side over side, His cry of fear a piercing thing That penetrates where shadows hide. Keen eyes make note from lower still. The form that bears them does not pause But leaps to rapid upward flight. Dan cannot comprehend the cause-- One moment he was good as dead, The next, *whooshed* up; he swoops and lands. The blackness in his view recedes; A catwalk's treads are in his hands. He tries to slow his breath and heart, Then looks aside; a path of gray Leads up and up. Dan follows with His eyes--to meet the face of Rei! Still panting, Dan recoils in fear, Not yet prepared to flee or fight. Rei stands; and is that steely gaze A fraction softer at the sight? Too much of honor's compromise Has passed this night, with Rei's keen blade Forsaken out of fear and pride-- Or vanity; the price he paid His hand; but worse, his own sworn word. He could not keep the promise made To Dan; to bring him down once more. Now Rei himself has been betrayed And by the power the boy defies. Brave lad! Despite his lack of wiles, He too has honor; let him live! And having made amends--Rei smiles. End part 26 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 27 Rei turns his head to raise his sights, Now scowling; up a darkened stair He walks, as if impelled by fate, Then stands; confronts his master's glare. "Rei!" Count Lee orders. "Stand aside!" Rei says, "I've stood without surcease! Too far you've gone; no further forth Shall you proceed, but rest in peace!" And in his hand the Mandrake lamp Appears; its flame elicits cries Of pain and fear from all that troupe Behind Count Lee, who shields his eyes With one gnarled hand against the light Rei's steady stride brings nearer still. Rei says, "And yet I trusted you Your faith to keep and word fulfill. I shall nevermore fall to such foolish belief: I have lost my left hand and my best-beloved friends. What will fifty years cost, if I keep to this pace? How much more should I suffer before this farce ends? Let the Mandrake's dark force freeze the ice of your heart, And the strength of my arm lend its aid to the task, So by stake or by sword, your commands soon shall cease And my wrongs be requited: No more shall I ask!" Rei's form is embraced by that halo of light, The color of blood intermingled with cold. His eyes are as bright as the flame that he bears, And that lends his gray locks tiny highlights of gold. The ghoul-things moan and cringe from him, This juggernaut that nothing stops. Blood's Mandrake burns to freeze their veins, Their bones--until Count Lee's hand drops. His gaze, a beam of fiercer red, Shoots forth as from a single eye. The Mandrake, speared by crimson frost, Is shattered, and its fragments fly. What marks Rei's features for a blink Is consternation, not quite fear, That shifts to anger unalloyed. Lee speaks, his face and voice a sneer: "You think I cannot work a spell Against what I myself bestow?" Rei's hand moves swiftly toward his blade, But faster still the burning glow That strikes him from the vampire's stare, A solid thing, a grasp of light To freeze the blood--or Rei himself, In what he planned as Count Lee's plight. An insect bound in spider-silk, A leaf blown on a winter's gale, Is not more helpless, less forlorn Than Rei: A shaft, a beam, a pale Of ruby magic, shot with bolts Of white, expands; like serpent-coils, Surrounds his body, flings him up And backward in its crimson toils. Thus netted, Rei is swung through space As fast as he himself could fly, But upright, backward, helpless still To strike a column with a cry Of pain: half grunt, half grudging scream, As blood flies from his wounded head At impact from a force so great It might well leave a human dead. It presses Rei to cold, hard rock A moment only; Death must wait Until Count Lee has had his fill: Release so soon is not Rei's fate, But column after column meets His battered form; at each he shouts His agony: back, chest, and face Meet rock so hard they bleed in gouts That spatter, run in red, red streams To tempt a vampire's glistening teeth, A torture-trail of shredded skin That marks the broken bones beneath. This column game grows old at last For Magnus Lee; what's left of Rei He brings full circle, back again, A pallid insect on display, A gray moth trapped upon a pin, Stiff, moveless, flattened, all outspread, But like the victim of a child Who plays collector: Not yet dead. A vampire's broken mortal toy, Rei sails inverted, bleeding head Wide-eyed, past pain or fear alone; Lands briefly, crown to catwalk tread, Where one last bloodstain marks his wake, The passage of a soul who tried His courage on an Old One's strength. A vampire lord is not defied So readily, and Rei endures One final blow from Count Lee's gaze. Still upside-down, he's lifted up, Flung back amid a crimson haze, A cloud that flows from every wound, Forced out by that same deadly stare That pins him to the wall above A broad, arched door, with bloodstained hair, And eyelids showing full half-globes With more of gums than teeth revealed By lips, a rictus pressed to jaws That cannot scream but slowly yield Like all the spreading, cracking skull. "Good-bye, Rei Ginsei," says Count Lee, Whose eyes go wider; harsh their glow On Rei, whose eyes no longer see, His vision gone, though breath remains Until a burst of red and gray At last ends pain and groans and fears And hopes and life itself for Rei. Count Lee regards his handiwork. "Now, *that* was fun!" The dripping gore (That trickles from the jagged flesh Where Rei's neck ends) falls, strikes the floor With quiet sounds, a counterpoint To Count Lee's loud, cruel laugh that rings Throughout the old obsidian halls That house a thousand undead things. End part 27 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 28 The dark-robed creatures nearly fill The worship room; the dead mouths drone A paean in their own weird tongue To Lee, their lord; no monarch's throne Could ask more worship than they give Their master; every dull, dead eye Is fixed where Count Lee proudly stands With Doris pale and still nearby Upon a dais far below The portrait that surveys the room: A noble face now dark with age Of years in subterranean gloom. Count Lee steps forward; silence reigns, And stillness: "Speaking for my bride, And for myself: I thank you all." The echo of his words has died But barely as he lifts his hand, Empowered by magic black as night: A corpse-cold brazier belches flames That writhe up to the ceiling's height. With gentle gestures Count Lee smoothes Aside the cloth on Doris' hair And brushes back her long, free locks; Reveals her neck so soft and fair, But bearing marks to prove his claim Upon her body, blood, and soul. One cold hand turns her head aside; His eyes grow bright, so near his goal. "No woman ever dared defy My will as you have sought to do, Nor garnered *such* a champion-- The trouble that you've put me to!" He bares his teeth; saliva gleams And glistens in the twilight dim. Half-opened jaws draw near the throat That waits a vampire-master's whim. The cold breath of a ravening growl Bestirs her locks; the old dark eyes Grow narrow--then the fanged mouth gasps; The white head turns, outraged surprise On sharp, grim features; faster still Than Lee can move, a dagger flies Into his eye! --And who would dare Disturb him thus? What creature tries?! He grasps the dagger, pulls it out-- Blood gushes from the wound, then stops, For vampire-flesh soon heals itself. Almost unheard, the dagger drops, Its clatter drowned by cries the crowd Of ghouls emits as it lets through A figure with a gleaming sword, And toward whom Magnus Lee snarls, "*You!*" The brazier roars, and D proclaims: "Your time is past; your Noble's rights The relic of an era dead, When vampires ruled the empty nights, Rebuilt the towns, restored the lands, Endured an earth no human could-- But vanity, unthinking pride Put evil in the place of good." Long shadows are dancing and colors go strange In the flame of the brazier: its yellow and gold Make the portrait seem green and D's cloak midnight black, While the old vampire's cheeks appear ruddy and cold. He gives a snort. "Invade my lands, My home--and criticize my rule? What can you know of ancient times And ways, you young, pretentious fool?" D says, "I see where you are blind. The world of darkness gave you birth-- Return to it! The vampire-kind Pollutes the face of living earth!" The great sword sweeps the brazier's flame And severs it; to ash it dies. Count Lee steps from the dais down And forward. "Do you realize," He asks, amusement in his voice, "What you are saying? What could be More farcical than your intent To harm the mighty House of Lee? You are a dhampire, half-breed spawn Of some Dark Lord and some poor slut He should have killed before she came To term and whelped a mongrel mutt. The pleasures of this night will wait Until your worthless life has passed-- I grant, you give me cause for doubts About how long a wife should last!" D bares his teeth, his green eyes fierce, And leaps the brazier; in both hands He wields his long and heavy sword. The edge makes contact as he lands, But rings against a magic shield That glows as it surrounds Count Lee. A second blow has no effect: D's eyes go wide: Can this thing be? It can. It is. The Old One grins In triumph, and his eyes turn red. Their deadly crimson beams blaze forth To throng the air about D's head, Spin down and out and all around His guarded stance, a fibrous fire That traces every nerve and vein, Clings close, enwraps his form entire. D crouches lower, muscles tense With effort to resist the power That saps his strength and chills his blood, But like some half-blown darkling flower With petals curled against the cold, Uprooted by a grip of frost, So D is lifted from the floor And leaflike, Rei-like, helpless tossed To ceiling black and smooth and hard As ice; blood gushes down his face And spatters, smearing in his wake; The droplets paint a ruby lace Where they lie cooling, left behind, As D is flung from wall to wall On neck and back and shoulders hurled; From every impact, blood-drops fall. Lee's fiendish laugh distorts his face, Malicious leer hyena-wide, As one last stroke of magic art Slams D into a column-side Headfirst; a final splash of blood Sends streaks afresh through auburn hair; Now limbs and rippling cape outspread, D hovers, trapped in dark midair. Lee looks at him from far below And chuckles. "What a fix you're in! You're just a dhampire, yet you thought To take a Noble on--and win! You've been as much a fool as Rei; You should have seen the way he died. I'll choose another death for you, More fitting for the task you've tried." Through all that D has suffered here So far, he has retained his sword; But at Lee's whim his grip is loosed From haft, as of its own accord. The blade whirls free; like D it hangs Suspended, edge toward wide green eyes, A face gone pale from loss of blood, And lips that part in gasped surprise. Count Lee says, "I may never know How many vampires you have slain-- Your kin by blood! And yet you were Their foe, and by this sword their bane." The blade creeps nearer D's clenched teeth, Pressed toward his throat by Count Lee's eye That glitters as his voice intones, "As you have killed, so shall you die!" End part 28 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 29 Some say that age and treachery Will ever conquer youth and skill, And thus an ancient vampire's strength Must overcome a dhampire's will, Wherever right or wrong may side, Whatever precious lives depend Upon the outcome: so it is, And shall be, to the world's dark end. No Hunter dares to hold such thoughts So long as will to live remains: While there is pulse and warmth and breath And blood that flows in living veins And vows to keep and lives to save, A hero's heart cannot afford To cower or admit despair, However near his throat a sword. Yet close and closer still it draws, The gleaming edge; it touches skin; It cuts; the tint of blood it frees Unleashes D's dark power within. D's eyes take on their flame-blue glow, An eerie light that drives the blade Away with one last tiny splash Of blood that Lee sees bloom, then fade Upon the edge that whirls about; The haft resumes its rightful place-- Its owner's grip! And Count Lee gasps; Astonishment transforms his face, His eyes' red glow eclipsed by shock. "But you--who *are* you?" he demands. D wastes no words but plunges down, The sword-hilt fast in both his hands, Its point aimed straight at Count Lee's heart! Lee marshals speed against his foe; Palms clap together at his breast, Forestall the blade-tip's deadly blow. With sharp steel pressed between his hands And murder gleaming out his eyes, The Old One cannot call on spells-- Such arts the flame-blue gaze defies; But still he has a vampire's strength And fury, and a Noble's pride. So fast the motion seems a blur, He flings D's heavy blade aside And draws his own--a dagger curved, A fang of steel, thrown like a dart, With deadly aim and force no less: The keen point flies to pierce D's heart! A cry of pain escapes D's lips, But nonetheless, his aim is true. His sword, thrown as the dagger was Strikes Count Lee's heart and runs it through! -- So great is the strength that empowers its flight, That with Count Lee impaled, it streaks up to the wall And, impossibly high, pins the castle's Dark Lord At the side of the portrait that overlooks all. | --==//////////[}}===* | Ramika gasps and lifts her head, Eyes opening, her eyelids freed. Blood calls; two bloods half hers, half not: But which to scorn and which to heed? | *==={{]//////////==-- | Count Lee roars out his helpless pain; D's glowing gaze strikes one last blow: It rams his heavy sword hilt-deep: Cold blood wells out, a fountain's flow, Far more than any corpse should hold, That stains Count Lee from breast to toe, Runs down the old obsidian wall To puddle on the floor below, As if the blood of all the years, Of all the victims, all the lives Of sons and daughters, cherished friends, And honest husbands, loving wives, Had been imprisoned, vampire-kept, But in its human spirit free. At last it flees unnatural bonds So long imposed by Magnus Lee. The Hunter's eyes are green again; His knees grow weak and meet the floor. Pain twists his face; the dagger hilt He grasps, and with one effort more He pulls it out. Blood gushes forth And stains the shaking, dark-gloved hand. His dhampire's heart will heal in time; For now, he's far too weak to stand But falls to curl on hands and knees With head bent low; the long folds hide His face beneath his flowing cape. The Dark Lord's dying eyes go wide To see that trembling, helpless form. One final time, his gaze burns red; The effort thrusts a groan between His gritted teeth; he bows his head In concentration. Doris starts; Her own eyes wide, unfocused, blind. She stoops, her hand a vampire's pawn, The cat's-paw of a vampire's mind; Lifts up the dagger D's hand threw Unerring to a Dark Lord's eye. She walks to D's still-huddled form; Above his back she holds it high. Count Lee's eyes glitter eagerly; One gesture will destroy his foe, But from the doorway comes a cry-- Dan's panicked shout of, "Sister--No!" The spell is broken past repair: No silent wish or voiced command Holds Doris, and the dagger drops Unheeded from her nerveless hand. She murmurs, "Dan?" Her eyelids fall, And, weak and fainting, so does she. Dan runs to catch her--"Sis! Hang on!" One hope remains for Magnus Lee: Ramika enters, head held high. "My daughter! Hear your father's plea For vengeance--slay the filth who brings Dishonor on the House of Lee!" The scion of the noble house Holds steady in her course and pace, Ignores the nearly-prostrate D, But gazes at her father's face. She stands before him. "Father, no. The Noble ways--a Noble's place-- You've set aside. To stoop so low Has brought our kindred true disgrace." Count Lee stares down and stammers, "--What?!" Ramika says, "We cannot be True Nobles if we are not pure In blood and deeds; Now you--now *we*-- Cannot make good our ancient claim To rulership; your careless lust Has brought us overwhelming shame. The House of Lee shall fall. It must!" As if the inky walls themselves Bear witness to the rightful heir, The castle trembles. Count Lee snarls, "Ridiculous!" and turns his glare Aside and upward; from his lips Cold blood runs, stark on pale, dead skin, Unheeded as the old face views The portrait: noblest of his kin, A last resort; one time revered, Now long ignored by Magnus Lee. Yet seen so close, the features look Familiar--but how can they be? How can--? The answer makes him gasp And turn again to view his foe, Now half recovered, on his knees, Then rising, every gesture slow. The vampire sees that Doris stands; Encroaching blackness dims his sight As she and D and Dan exchange Swift queries of, "Are you all right?" They are. They all are. Satisfied, D straightens, walks--the face, the *face*! Count Lee fights weakness, turns again; The Noble founder of his race-- So like! Then is the legend true, That such a being lives on earth? Half vampire, yet by blood much more, His name a hint of Noble birth? With voice unsteady, Magnus Lee Asks--nearly begs--"Are you the one--? By name the sigil of the First, And to the Noblest Sire ... a son ... ?" End part 29 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 30 Count Lee's head drops; his eyes fall shut In final death so long defied. Ramika stands unmoving still; Now D has dared approach her side, Regards her from a few arms' length. She shows a Noble's pride of place, Erect in carriage, shoulders square-- But tears are streaming down her face Where eyes gone hopeless gaze no less Upon the portrait long adored Of Dracula, the sire of all Her family and First Dark Lord. So that was what she saw in him: The Hunter shares the noble mien Of him she owes allegiance to In all. How could she not have seen? The castle has not ceased to shake: Like fossil-mist the dark debris That rains on all within that place. At last Ramika says, "Lord D--" D shakes his head. "No lord am I, But dhampire, and I do not claim That title. You are dhampire, too--" Ramika says, "You know my shame? To this day I believed I was Noble in truth. Now I know I am half breed--but how did you find What was hidden from me--?" "When I first saw your face. Like knows like, little sister, and kind knows its kind." The castle trembles harder now. What was a mist becomes a rain Of pebbles in a flow as fierce As tears evoked by searing pain. "Our Founder will destroy our house," Ramika says. "I too must die. I grew up in the Noble ways, And death is better than a lie." D protests, "You need not! You need not be ashamed Of your half-human blood, for it means you can choose. You need not be alone in the darkness and void As are Nobles: And will you so lightly refuse The world that awaits you; a world full of hope? The dull living death that was all that Count Lee Ever knew or imagined need not be your fate. My lady--Ramika--please, leave here with me." Perhaps it is the crumbling walls That shake D's voice; Ramika's face Remains impassive, centered still Upon the founder of her race. She says, "This is the way I know." A tremor rolls across the floor. The wall where Count Lee's body hangs, So weighted, can withstand no more. It shivers, buckles, crashes down And shatters; Dan and Doris see How near the long blue cloak it falls, And with one voice they call out, "D--!" Perhaps he has heard them. He does not react-- No more than Ramika, whose cheeks now are dry. She stares at the dark where the portrait once hung: "I have lived as a Noble, and Noble I die!" And at last she abandons the place she has kept For so long: She strides forward, legs rippling her cape. D watches, stock still; she does not turn or pause But recedes until darkness has swallowed her shape. <\ -=======================>:::(O)\\\\\\]O O[\\\\\\(O):::<=======================- \> Upon a cliff-top near the plain Of Castle Lee, three figures stand Beside D's horse that brought them there; They gaze across the barren land: D tall and cloaked, impassive still, By Doris in her bridal white; And on her other side is Dan: As one they watch the castle's height That quivers, sways, then slowly sinks Into the gorge that gave it birth Millennia past when Magnus Lee By magic raised it from the earth. Now unprotesting it returns With muted rumbles; dust clouds rise, Then settle with the spires' descent. A whirl of chthonic lighting flies Up every buttress, down each wall In dancing streaks; a land now free Of vampire-taint lets close the gorge And swallows up the House of Lee. One fear remains to be assuaged: The first rays of the rising sun Shine bright on Doris' markless throat: In truth, the Hunter's work is done. End part 30 Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation Part 31 The sun is low; the air is cool With morning mists; a soft wind blows Between the mountains, over fields Where flowers bloom and lush grass grows. The road winds as ever, but now through a land Growing greener about it; D follows its course To the jingle of harness, his saddle's soft creak, And the metronome hooves of the gray cyborg horse. The road lies before him, and thus should he look: To the future that waits; to the world that is vast. He is not new to travel, and long has he known There's no promise or profit in thoughts of the past. But D thinks back on how he rose: The symbiot's yawn: "It's not yet light. There must be fifty ways to leave.... D, can't we stay another night?" "I've lain on this couch far too long as it is." "Well, maybe you ought to try Doris's bed--" "Shut *up*! I remind you, I still have a sword." "Oh, calm yourself, D. ...Was it something I said?" D still has a sword, though the one that he brought, Long his weapon, with many a vampire's blood stained, Was lost to the downfall of Count Magnus Lee, Devoured with the castle and all it contained. So Doris had told him: "I know what you said-- It was payment enough if you slew Magnus Lee. But I owe you so much. D, please--take Father's sword, And call it a gift if you don't want a fee." She pressed it to him, curled his grip Around the sheath and backed away. D gazed in silence at her hands, Now empty: Could mere speech repay The heritage a Hunter left: Its balanced weight a work of art; Its hilt worn smooth with years of use-- A comfort to both eyes and heart. At last he spoke: "A gift may show More honor than my words can tell." He drew the blade's curved, shining length And softly said, "You've kept it well." She had. It is worthy of wearing with pride For itself, with the guard in its double-L shape. So once more accoutered, D rides on his way As before, with one difference: Above his long cape, The collar that spread like a proud monarch's crown Is now curled together, wrapped over his face And firmly, one tip crumpled down from the force That he used to be sure he had fixed it in place. Doris finds the couch vacant; with unsteady hand She touches the fabric; it's cold as the air. Dan runs back from the barn, slams the door in his haste. Panting hard, he exclaims, "Sis! His horse isn't there!" The two exchange glances. He left--just like that? But when? Why? And whither--can anyone tell? "The road," Doris murmurs. They know how it wends-- If they run, there's a chance of a final farewell. And so they dash in frantic haste. Dan doesn't know he's close to tears, He runs so hard, and at his side Is Doris; there are harsher fears Than losing what one never had (Or never held) to call one's own. But still--she owes him: let him feel For one last moment, not alone. Alone. He is destined and tamely accepts Such a fate, for his heart knows that he is a thing Outside nature; paired butterflies dance past his face, And in sweet, mocking harmony, mated birds sing. They halt at cliff-edge, mouths agape And gasping: Did he even go This way? They scan the countryside And see a figure far below. What he told in the castle was less than the truth, When he said to Ramika that there is no shame In one's half Noble blood; but she treasured the part He despises: the lineage shown in his name. His name--? Is that the sound that pulls His reverie from eyes and ears? It comes again, a distant cry: "D! --*D!*" And when he's sure he hears Reality and not a dream, He blinks; reins in the cyborg horse, And turns his head aside and up; Beneath his hat brim views the source: He stopped--he surely heard them call! Dan waves both arms--he's *got* to see! Two voices mingle on the wind: "Good luck!" "Take care!" "We'll miss you, D!" They will. They mean it. Bless them both; He'll remember them, surely, until his life ends. They are worthy of better--he did right to leave-- Yet how fitting he has to look up to his friends: For who cannot admire what is innocent, brave? In a life made of loneliness, who would not yearn To remain? Given trust, offered unflinching love Of a family--how not to love in return? At a distance so great, they cannot see his face And the emerald eyes shining warm as his heart. It's as well that he left before dawn as he did: Who could view that expression and let him depart? D at last breaks the spell that those sweet voices cast; Not responding in kind, for what words could he speak To begin to repay--? But he silently nods, And the high collar brushes his half-hidden cheek. That fabric, chill in morning air, Provides cold comfort with its touch: He rightly cloaks his face and leaves: Of late he's shown his teeth too much. | --==/////////////[}}====* | Horizons beckon; D rides on. Such irony that he survives To travel and fulfill his vow To shelter blameless human lives By use of half-inhuman powers Inherited--yes, legends say A dhampire is by nature fit, By heritage foredoomed, to slay His kin, who through unnatural blood Escape the peace of grave or tomb. Ramika--may she rest--was right: Lust yields the seeds of vampires' doom. The collar-tips are crossed like swords Of fallen men who will not rise. Above: The broad-brimmed hat pulled low; Between: Deep-shadowed, haunted eyes Held wide as if the lids were gone, Cut off by one who fears in heart To wake from sleep and find himself Grown stronger in his nightmare part. His gaze remains shaded; his course remains clear: There are evils he cannot and will not allow To remain in this world, though his kin they may be: In despite of his blood, he is true to his vow. So he follows the road; though he knows not its length, Nor how rocky or narrow or steep it may be, Nor how quickly (or whether) he'll meet with its end; He has chosen his path: Let the Nobles fear D. End part 31 Ascii sword by Tua Xiong ===================================================== Credit goes not only to individual ascii artists but to Earle Goodman, collector of ascii blades, for the sword dingbats that have ornamented selected episodes of this adaptation. ===================================================== END Vampire Hunter D: A Verse Adaptation AFTERWORD As I said in the introduction, I have made changes from what appeared in the movie for various reasons, ranging from continuity improvements to whims. Those who have not seen _Vampire Hunter D_ or have seen it only once and not too recently will probably not have noticed the modifications, but in case there are purists out there reading, here are acknowledgements and explanations of some of my work (with one or two possible spoilers if you haven't seen the movie): THAT CANDLE/LAMP The lamp that Rei uses against D is called, in the original Japanese, _tokei do mashi noku_, which have I have been told means "watch that changes life." I have also seen it referred to (in translation) as a "time deceiver lamp;" the mook synopsis says that it "changes night to day." This makes no sense for a weapon to be used against D; he makes numerous daytime appearances and obviously can withstand sunlight. I found "watch that changes life" neither poetical nor clear. The word "watch" implies an effect on time, as pointless here as for a "time deceiver lamp." If this means time of day (i.e., day vs. night), there is no reason the lamp should affect D; if it indicates passage of time -- for example, if it causes a time warp into the future -- there is still no reason it should harm vampires, who do not grow old with the passage of time. So I drew on another aspect of magical lore: the hand of glory, also known as mandrake by corruption of the French form _main de gloire_. The hand of glory/mandrake is, if memory serves, the hand of an executed criminal prepared so that it can be used as a candle; when lit, it will paralyze the occupants of a house. Something with a flame that paralyzes vampires might reasonably be called "The Mandrake of Blood" or "Blood's Mandrake" for its power over those distinguished by their blood. D is half vampire, and if it is true, as the count's messenger says, that "noblest blood feels greatest harm," then D, as son of the noblest of vampires, would be very vulnerable to the flame's effects. THAT STAKE In the movie, how does the stake get out of D's chest? I have no idea. It's there when Rei leaves and gone when the symbiot returns to its host; in fact, if you pause your tape or laserdisc at the beginning of that scene, you can see the stake lying on the ground near D's head. In my adaptation, I've left it in and given the symbiot the task of removing it. DORIS'S NECK I've always been disturbed by the disappearance of the marks from Doris's neck once D retrieved her from the castle. There would have been ways to rationalize that, but I decided to leave them there until Count Lee's destruction. REI'S MOTIVES One problem with trying to add continuity where it did not exist before is that characters may become hopelessly distorted or their motives unlikely. Rei, for example: How on earth to explain his rescuing Dan? I originally thought he did it out of simple compassion for a child, but then I remembered that Rei was going to let his friends have Dan, as well as Dr. Fering, for a quick snack. Whether Rei would really be concerned about keeping his word to would-be monster fodder, I don't know. I can only hope so, since in my adaptation, he was. ^_- D'S SWORD The replacement of the Lang sword for D's is not my invention: the former is very clearly shown at D's shoulder in the final scenes of the movie. I've only added a bridge passage to make explicit how this occurred. D'S REFLECTIONS Not until I was actually writing the final stanzas did it occur to me that Ramika is correct (albeit for different reasons from those she claims) about the dangers of vampires consorting with humans. Folklore has it that dhampires -- the result of human-vampire couplings -- have special vampire-slaying powers. Following this to its logical conclusion: a vampire who fathers a dhampire thereby virtually signs his own death warrant. Might D's career as Vampire Hunter have in fact begun with his own father? That D *may* have taken a more charitable view toward the noblest of vampires is implied when he reminds Ramika that "the First" believed in more than hunger and rulership for his kind (never specifying the preferred alternative, alas). Does The First still walk the earth somewhere, in peaceful coexistence with his food supply? The movie does not answer this question, nor can I. ODDS AND ENDS I have mentioned continuity problems; some aspects of the movie as it stands I dislike as a matter of taste. Sexism, for example. In the ftp-able script, Dan tells Ramika, "WE don't kill women!" (At the same place in the Streamline dub, Dan says of D, "He doesn't like to kill, like you do.") Although I found this offensive, I had to laugh when I read it. If a woman is a danger to one's well-being, it makes more sense to kill her than to gallantly let oneself be killed. I hope that removing the occasional bit of sexism has made my version of D more sensible rather than more PC. I've tweaked here and rearranged there. I've made D less taciturn and more vulnerable; Rei perhaps more honorable; Ramika a trace less distant. And I cheerfully admit to having given D's symbiot more and juicier lines: they seem to fit the creature. Unfashionableness of rhymed, metered verse notwithstanding, I hope I've used that art to add a little something, at least for those whose sensibilities lean that way. And while it was a struggle, it's been fun. If anyone out there has enjoyed it or found that it makes the movie _Vampire Hunter D_ more comprehensible or meaningful, then I've done something right, and I'm happy in that knowledge. (And it wouldn't hurt my feelings if you dropped me a line telling me so. ^_^ ) The Certifiable Vampire Hunter D Fanatic The Mad Bibliographer of the listserv Vampyres Cathy Krusberg Internet: ckberg@ix.netcom.com April 1995